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Pat
Sorry, I haven't been around much - circumstances, circumstances, travel and such - but I finally found some time and finished this utterely delightful story of yours, which definitely deserves a wider audience...
posted by
Nautikos
on October 10, 2010 at 8:09 AM
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LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!
What a delightful story and the ending is the icing on the cake!
posted by
Bel_
on October 9, 2010 at 6:47 AM
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PatB
You really are the best, what a terrific story. I was thrilled with the ending too luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 8, 2010 at 6:20 PM
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great story Pat love...you really are the artist.....I liked the twist
on who really was the ghostly disturbance in the house...good ending. well done.
posted by
Kabu
on October 8, 2010 at 4:19 PM
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The best ending! Loved your story, Pat-B! Your characters are so real - became my friends - except for the fishwife, of course...I wanted to slap her! great writing!!!
posted by
adnohr
on October 8, 2010 at 7:47 AM
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