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Re: one time
That will be the day Bob, I will have to plaster my hair with brylcream and I don't think that's spelled right, but I'm used to a few red marks on my report.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 7, 2010 at 11:14 PM
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Thank you Lion you are pretty good yourself
posted by
C_C_T
on October 7, 2010 at 11:09 PM
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Re: great last line
Thank you poetjpb we don't need shades here today although it is supposed to be warm.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 7, 2010 at 11:09 PM
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Thank you Sam, this is 7:05 am so I guess you are dreaming hopefully.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 7, 2010 at 11:06 PM
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Re: C.C....
Aways hope my friend, even when all seems lost. Thank you Rumor
posted by
C_C_T
on October 7, 2010 at 11:02 PM
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Thank you Justi one must try to think the right kind of thoughts.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 7, 2010 at 11:00 PM
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Re: Do we get a second chance like this I wonder...perhaps so....
Sweet thoughts Kabu if we can still smell the roses.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 7, 2010 at 10:58 PM
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Well sometimes it was imagined Class Barriers F.S.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 7, 2010 at 10:57 PM
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Re: CORNCRAKE
Yes life is full of surprises Wiley some nice hopefully. Thank you
posted by
C_C_T
on October 7, 2010 at 10:56 PM
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Thank you CG
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C_C_T
on October 7, 2010 at 10:54 PM
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posted by
Cheerygirl
on October 7, 2010 at 6:30 PM
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CORNCRAKE
The slamming of doors usually put an end to relationships in my life. You said it so well there may be hope in your case old pal.
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 7, 2010 at 5:54 PM
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An experience that is so painful but one in which that can be enriching. Hopefully they will meet again...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 7, 2010 at 4:58 PM
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Do we get a second chance like this I wonder...perhaps so....
a love can blossom in another life....nice thought anyway and beautiful writing CC.
posted by
Kabu
on October 7, 2010 at 1:14 PM
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Powerful poem, you can come back, even after the obituary had been said. This is great.
posted by
Justi
on October 7, 2010 at 11:05 AM
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C.C....
the trap was sprung and and the rage of all that coloured emotion did you in to the point of reading the obituary column...a natural disaster to be sure, but who knows, you may meet again....a wistfully sad poem, but one that leaves the reader feeling there still might be hope...


....(at least it did me)
posted by
Rumor
on October 7, 2010 at 10:30 AM
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There are things that happen that are of no consequence but seem to take the lead for one reason or another! I have had this occur more than once in my life! I really enjoyed the imagery, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 7, 2010 at 9:36 AM
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Of this one time --- CC - i may see threadbare images;
supple in one thing: depth of love that has survived even 'death' and this has touched me. EE

posted by
elysianfields
on October 7, 2010 at 8:51 AM
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great last line
posted by
poetjpb
on October 7, 2010 at 7:52 AM
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Elegantly said, not only is your imagery powerful but your precise choice of words makes this an engulfing joy to read
posted by
lionreign
on October 7, 2010 at 6:21 AM
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one time
I wish you the eloquence all right, but suspect that you won't need it, being the old smoothie that you are, CC.
posted by
2902
on October 7, 2010 at 5:30 AM
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