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Re: one time
That will be the day Bob, I will have to plaster my hair with brylcream and I don't think that's spelled right, but I'm used to a few red marks on my report. 

posted by C_C_T on October 7, 2010 at 11:14 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you Lion you are pretty good yourself

posted by C_C_T on October 7, 2010 at 11:09 PM | link to this | reply

Re: great last line
Thank you poetjpb we don't need shades here today although it is supposed to be warm.

posted by C_C_T on October 7, 2010 at 11:09 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you Sam, this is 7:05 am  so I guess you are dreaming hopefully.  

posted by C_C_T on October 7, 2010 at 11:06 PM | link to this | reply

Re: C.C....
Aways hope my friend, even when all seems lost. Thank you Rumor 

posted by C_C_T on October 7, 2010 at 11:02 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you Justi one must try to think the right kind of thoughts.

posted by C_C_T on October 7, 2010 at 11:00 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Do we get a second chance like this I wonder...perhaps so....
Sweet thoughts Kabu if we can still smell the roses.

posted by C_C_T on October 7, 2010 at 10:58 PM | link to this | reply

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Well sometimes it was imagined Class Barriers F.S.

posted by C_C_T on October 7, 2010 at 10:57 PM | link to this | reply

Re: CORNCRAKE
Yes life is full of surprises Wiley some nice hopefully. Thank you

posted by C_C_T on October 7, 2010 at 10:56 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you CG

posted by C_C_T on October 7, 2010 at 10:54 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Cheerygirl on October 7, 2010 at 6:30 PM | link to this | reply

CORNCRAKE
The slamming of doors usually put an end to relationships in my life. You said it so well there may be hope in your case old pal.

posted by WileyJohn on October 7, 2010 at 5:54 PM | link to this | reply

An experience that is so painful but one in which that can be enriching. Hopefully they will meet again...

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 7, 2010 at 4:58 PM | link to this | reply

Do we get a second chance like this I wonder...perhaps so....
a love can blossom in another life....nice thought anyway and beautiful writing CC.

posted by Kabu on October 7, 2010 at 1:14 PM | link to this | reply

Powerful poem, you can come back, even after the obituary had been said. This is great.

posted by Justi on October 7, 2010 at 11:05 AM | link to this | reply

C.C....
the trap was sprung and and the rage of all that coloured emotion did you in to the point of reading the obituary column...a natural disaster to be sure, but who knows, you may meet again....a wistfully sad poem, but one that leaves the reader feeling there still might be hope.......(at least it did me)

posted by Rumor on October 7, 2010 at 10:30 AM | link to this | reply

There are things that happen that are of no consequence but seem to take the lead for one reason or another! I have had this occur more than once in my life! I really enjoyed the imagery, too! sam 

posted by sam444 on October 7, 2010 at 9:36 AM | link to this | reply

Of this one time --- CC - i may see threadbare images; supple in one thing: depth of love that has survived even 'death' and this has touched me. EE

posted by elysianfields on October 7, 2010 at 8:51 AM | link to this | reply

great last line

posted by poetjpb on October 7, 2010 at 7:52 AM | link to this | reply

Elegantly said, not only is your imagery powerful but your precise choice of words makes this an engulfing joy to read

posted by lionreign on October 7, 2010 at 6:21 AM | link to this | reply

one time
I wish you the eloquence all right, but suspect that you won't need it, being the old smoothie that you are, CC.

posted by 2902 on October 7, 2010 at 5:30 AM | link to this | reply