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posted by
Cheerygirl
on October 6, 2010 at 10:06 AM
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I guess you have got to look right through them Sam, sweet words don't butter parsnips.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 6, 2010 at 9:36 AM
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It's kind of eerie for me at times how well some folks can hide that transparency! Just boggles my mind! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 6, 2010 at 7:05 AM
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Thank you lionreign I note that you keep them coming
posted by
C_C_T
on October 6, 2010 at 6:48 AM
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Very interesting perspective and a wonderfully written poem
posted by
lionreign
on October 6, 2010 at 6:18 AM
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Re: This is truly awesome. I think you could take a rose and build a world.
Thank you Justi you have lovely thoughts at times
posted by
C_C_T
on October 5, 2010 at 11:19 PM
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Re: C.C....
Thank you Rumor just testing, no good afterwards and she wouldn't want someone who couldn't spell
posted by
C_C_T
on October 5, 2010 at 11:18 PM
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Re: and I know that you are an awesome poet and I shall read this again.
Aw shucks Kabu you don't get any better.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 5, 2010 at 11:14 PM
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Thank you Simone
posted by
C_C_T
on October 5, 2010 at 11:12 PM
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I guess you will see a few more F.S. It's human nature.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 5, 2010 at 11:12 PM
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Hmm I think you read the entrails of these poems E.E. You comments are always interesting
posted by
C_C_T
on October 5, 2010 at 11:10 PM
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Re: CORNCRAKE
Thank you Wiley I hope I don't grow too many of the same kind
posted by
C_C_T
on October 5, 2010 at 11:06 PM
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CORNCRAKE
You just grow these poems like all your other beautiful flowers, and some like this one I have to come back and see again my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 5, 2010 at 10:24 PM
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"rising hairs on the nape of the neck" --- love that description especially - felt it CC. Transparency - as the door wide open and the cows out in the field? ~ no really --- it's sad. From the tension to nettle to plastic card - sad. EE
posted by
elysianfields
on October 5, 2010 at 10:05 PM
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Some people like that mystique...I've seen many relationships end when the transparency was too much to bear.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 5, 2010 at 7:28 PM
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Bravo CC... Great write! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on October 5, 2010 at 6:35 PM
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and I know that you are an awesome poet and I shall read this again.
posted by
Kabu
on October 5, 2010 at 4:57 PM
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C.C....
you picked a good flower to compare her to - an impatiens - just insert a "t" and drop the "s" and you've got an impatient..see how fast she accepted your credit card for a night out?...should have stuck with the rose.
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posted by
Rumor
on October 5, 2010 at 1:47 PM
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This is truly awesome. I think you could take a rose and build a world.
posted by
Justi
on October 5, 2010 at 1:02 PM
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