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Thank you E.E. I am glad I didn't read Emily before hand or I might have scrapped the ribbons.
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C_C_T
on October 4, 2010 at 12:15 AM
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Thank you E.E. I am glad I didn't read Emily before hand or I might have scrapped the ribbons.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 4, 2010 at 12:15 AM
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Re: CORNCAKE
Thank you Bill one has to be good on Sunday
posted by
C_C_T
on October 4, 2010 at 12:11 AM
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CC - how utterly keen 'Ribbons' was the theme. Smoke and mirrors eh? I wonder what tails --- tales the ribbons would tell ~ as they fluttered. This is another great CC - much imagery - much analogy - much and much - (deep) ~ touching. EE
posted by
elysianfields
on October 3, 2010 at 9:49 PM
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CORNCAKE
. Powerful and passionate love poem sir. I love you. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
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BC-A
on October 3, 2010 at 9:16 PM
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Thank you Sue a lovely star now you only have eight left.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 3, 2010 at 12:49 PM
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Re: Never will you forget for you are still building I believe.
Hmm Kabu I feel more like tumbling down. Can't wait to see your photos. I'm glad I posted mine and got that over. Lots of news since you have been away locusts In Australia, famous lady visits home town drives across desert etc. Just getting you in trim again.
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C_C_T
on October 3, 2010 at 12:47 PM
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Re: This leaves me breathless
Well Bel one has to be a bit clinical writing poetry I try to do it in one foul swoop, and then if I am not happy which one never is come back and tweak a little. Thank you for calling
posted by
C_C_T
on October 3, 2010 at 12:39 PM
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Re: C.C...
Well one has to make hay even if there is not much grass Rumor. But thank you for your better explanation
posted by
C_C_T
on October 3, 2010 at 12:37 PM
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C.C...
"All is not seen, as we would wish it to be."
A perectly fitting line for your poem and for your creation here...created for the wrong reasons, your blue-eyed secret unravels completely and you are left without even a ribbon to remind yourself of her....the emotions you feel ring true....
posted by
Rumor
on October 3, 2010 at 11:29 AM
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This leaves me breathless
I can feel the emotion pouring off the page.
posted by
Bel_
on October 3, 2010 at 9:48 AM
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Never will you forget for you are still building I believe.
posted by
Kabu
on October 3, 2010 at 9:04 AM
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posted by
Star5_
on October 3, 2010 at 8:55 AM
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