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To be sure Sam or how would crocodiles make out.

posted by C_C_T on October 4, 2010 at 11:39 PM | link to this | reply

Re: C.C....
Yes Rumor a little bit of encouragement might work, we shall see.  

posted by C_C_T on October 4, 2010 at 11:38 PM | link to this | reply

Re: I enjoy reading your ...
Well Cheerygirl I don't expect you to read this far back,  so I won't make an amusing comment I mean it would be a clear waste of time the most precious gift we have, so I will try and keep this short although I feel I can write in sheer abandonment as you will never read this and so I don't think I should continue in this amusing manner any longer than is necessary. It is three minutes past my deadline for replying to comments and really I should have finished three minutes ago.      

posted by C_C_T on October 4, 2010 at 11:35 PM | link to this | reply

It truly is in the eyes of the beholder! sam 

posted by sam444 on October 4, 2010 at 5:30 PM | link to this | reply

C.C....

It sounds like the muse is coming right along inwardly:

"And in this new strange beauty which I found
Wonder so deeply at your sweet appeal."

But outwardly:

"I must shape you in a new sweet light
Your lips, your mouth, so help me please.
I mould your shoulders, hold you tight.
One can install only what one sees."

She remains so elusive even now...and when you call for help, it doesn't surprise me at all.... and whether she gives you that help remains to be seen.....

posted by Rumor on October 3, 2010 at 11:21 AM | link to this | reply

I enjoy reading your ...
humorous comments on peoples blogs as much as your poetry.

posted by Cheerygirl on October 3, 2010 at 8:30 AM | link to this | reply

Re: CORNCRAKE
Yes Probably Wiley but I think you should keep your floating a little closer to home. Hope you are happy

posted by C_C_T on October 2, 2010 at 11:28 PM | link to this | reply

Re: install the Muse
Thank you EE. Yes I have given Polly my moral support, but she seems to have things sorted. Well I expect they were a bit more on the mark in those days.

posted by C_C_T on October 2, 2010 at 11:24 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you Simone, I see, well feel it between your toes it is quite nice sand. I always had a horror of walking in seaside towns crunch, crunch, like a bowl scraping in an old fashioned sink kind of shivery.     

posted by C_C_T on October 2, 2010 at 11:20 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Seems to me
Bel your optimism is touching but I think you may have added an eyelash.

posted by C_C_T on October 2, 2010 at 11:15 PM | link to this | reply

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Yes it's sometimes an unstoppable application FS I've tried switching back to Word (02)

but to no avail

posted by C_C_T on October 2, 2010 at 11:00 PM | link to this | reply

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Goodness Justi you are right but they all seem to vanish on the stroke of twelve just like Cinderella . So nice to hear from you. 

posted by C_C_T on October 2, 2010 at 10:56 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Hmnnnn I can see your Muse someone you once knew I believe
Well knowing Kabu was coming back and a few quick alterations were made I wanted to get secrets loaded while she was away, I said to myself she can see through poems. Sorry Kabu just thinking out loud 

posted by C_C_T on October 2, 2010 at 10:53 PM | link to this | reply

Re: CORNCAKE
Yes Bill a funny shape so far

posted by C_C_T on October 2, 2010 at 10:47 PM | link to this | reply

CORNCAKE
R You shape love sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on October 2, 2010 at 9:02 PM | link to this | reply

Hmnnnn I can see your Muse someone you once knew I believe
perhaps a lost love or admired from afar

posted by Kabu on October 2, 2010 at 7:28 PM | link to this | reply

Ah such a beautiful muse... Look over your right shoulder, she is there all dressed out for the writer's ball.

posted by Justi on October 2, 2010 at 6:42 PM | link to this | reply

The speaker has the ability to see so much about the muse and the situation.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 2, 2010 at 4:44 PM | link to this | reply

Seems to me
That muse is taking shape even if you can't see it yet.

posted by Bel_ on October 2, 2010 at 3:49 PM | link to this | reply

You are doing a fine job downloading that muse from your thoughts and installing it... I am not worried,  I know its going to be a fantastic muse because you got the best tools to complete your installation... a fertil mind filled with tonders and an unstopable imagination :-)

PS:  In response to your comment on my latest poem... I wear no shoes to stand on the sand :-)  so no crunchy sound when I get back to the pavement but I do bring back with me the memory of its soft, accomodating touch :-)  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on October 2, 2010 at 3:04 PM | link to this | reply

install the Muse

I think you've shared quite the installment here.  My word CC - your poetry is by leaps and bounds inspiring.  I mean to tell you that this poem is (something I wish I had written)  - such feelings and design all over this one.  A keeper (and a re-reader) ~ yes I liked this a lot.  EE

(oh and by the way, I wrote a bit more on Polly - after reviving an old photo of her... http://www.blogit.com/Blogs/Blog.aspx/elysianfields189/ ) EE

posted by elysianfields on October 2, 2010 at 11:33 AM | link to this | reply

CORNCRAKE

Now wouldn't that be as lovely as you write my friend to be able to do this with past loves; "Float with you into summers I have lost" beautifully done old chap.

 

 

 

posted by WileyJohn on October 2, 2010 at 10:52 AM | link to this | reply