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A very enjoyable read, deep somewhat heartfelt and the means to overcome!
posted by
Mystereo
on October 1, 2010 at 7:11 AM
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C.C....
I notice this simple but important line in the middle of your poem:
"There was a flame."
Prior to this its a pretty dismal downhearted world of images, but from this line on one notices (at least I do) a shift to a bit more optimistic and happier thoughts and images:
"I long to go out where the time is rolling
And touch the warmth that must be waiting there"
At least now there is a glimmer of hope....
posted by
Rumor
on September 30, 2010 at 9:04 AM
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What fantastic imagery, you paint with phrases I wish I had thought of first
posted by
lionreign
on September 30, 2010 at 7:20 AM
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Thank you FS you are very constant.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 29, 2010 at 11:13 PM
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Re: bucket
Lo Bob It is frustrating I'll tell you what I think in your next blog.Thank you for calling
posted by
C_C_T
on September 29, 2010 at 11:12 PM
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Thank you Sam yes I'm sure you could work it into a poem dew etc. thorny, glistening juicy dribbling Oh go on get on with it, I don't own words.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 29, 2010 at 11:10 PM
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Thank you E.E. I admit defeat
posted by
C_C_T
on September 29, 2010 at 11:05 PM
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Re: CORNCAKE
Thank you Bill I wouldn't mind find a another one it it was on my conscience, conscious, can' t spell .
posted by
C_C_T
on September 29, 2010 at 11:01 PM
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Re: Simone
Thank you Simone u r not so bad yourself
posted by
C_C_T
on September 29, 2010 at 10:51 PM
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Loved it CC... and your images are amazing :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on September 29, 2010 at 9:17 PM
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CORNCAKE
I You possess the touch sir . BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on September 29, 2010 at 8:44 PM
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the dregs of a vessel ~ now that's something to write about, but you have --- and all this passion flows so fluid with you CC ~ You've got such a cavernous mind...deep and with many thoughts and visions. EE
posted by
elysianfields
on September 29, 2010 at 8:40 PM
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What a great poem! I loved blackberry eyes, I might steal it from you! lol sam
posted by
sam444
on September 29, 2010 at 7:13 PM
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bucket
I was right there with you in the pail for a while, but then you got too deep for me.
Question: what's going on?
My website's been absolutely starved this past week - no visitors except for you (not that that's not fine, but the number makes me wonder.) I put a lot of work into those poems, even the repeats, but it's almost as they never got posted! Off season, maybe?
posted by
2902
on September 29, 2010 at 6:23 PM
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So many intense feelings and images there.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 29, 2010 at 12:05 PM
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