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Thank you Sam just give me a clout if I get too personal after reading your poems, I would not be like it normally. I feel sometimes I am the unruly little scruff rooting through the accolades.
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C_C_T
on September 29, 2010 at 11:26 PM
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Re: CORNCAKE
Yes Bill one appreciates the times that I know you do
posted by
C_C_T
on September 29, 2010 at 11:22 PM
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Hi E.E. sometimes when I write a poem my eyes go moist and I know I am getting too near to things that I can do without.
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C_C_T
on September 29, 2010 at 11:21 PM
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Thank you LB I hope that you are keeping better you seem to write quite a lot I am mostly vegetarian but I have to read your recipes. I must remember to book mark.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 29, 2010 at 11:18 PM
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Your poem was very moving and emotional..
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MsJudy
on September 29, 2010 at 10:01 PM
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CC --- there was this old song I listened to as a young gal --- Welcome to my World by Jim Reeves ~ and your poem here has a sad ring to it...melancholy and yet with resolved. So much imagery and I agree with Shelly/Sam --- the last line cinches it. EE
posted by
elysianfields
on September 29, 2010 at 8:47 PM
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CORNCAKE
I At least there’s something beautiful there sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
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BC-A
on September 29, 2010 at 8:45 PM
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Concluding with beautiful day was excellent, but I liked this a lot:
To walk through a clear vision and meet someone there. sam
posted by
sam444
on September 29, 2010 at 7:17 PM
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