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Sinome
A paean to the autumnal sea - beautiful...
posted by
Nautikos
on September 28, 2010 at 3:27 PM
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as always!
posted by
Nita09
on September 28, 2010 at 9:21 AM
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wonderful... reading this poem was a complete delight, thank you for sharing it sweetie xoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on September 28, 2010 at 6:27 AM
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"
The pinks, oranges and yellows born from the sun
overwhelm my mind
as they dance on the gray stage of this autumn sky"
It's almost as if you were standing in my yard last evening looking at the Kansas City sky.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 28, 2010 at 6:14 AM
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Sinome, as C.C. has said,
so very auntingly beautiful...you mix emotions into your imagery so well, one feels like they are standing on the shore, on the sand, with you....your poetry is second to none, as always..
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posted by
Rumor
on September 28, 2010 at 5:37 AM
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Sinome
Y A lovely place to make a poetic stand love. Bca-bill’s rJLst
posted by
BC-A
on September 27, 2010 at 10:57 PM
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Dreaming leads to so many beautiful things...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 27, 2010 at 7:28 PM
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water is almos tlike air to me, this poem is beautiful
posted by
Tzippy
on September 27, 2010 at 12:11 PM
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Oh yeah, this poem really takes me away! So beautifully written!
posted by
steamfly
on September 27, 2010 at 11:24 AM
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Sinome
you paint what I desire - I had forgotten how much I enjoyed 'water' visions and where sunsets and sunrises seemingly take on a whole new effect...this is beautiful as always. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on September 27, 2010 at 8:12 AM
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Hauntingly beautiful as always Simone
posted by
C_C_T
on September 27, 2010 at 6:01 AM
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on the sand
God help you, you're in love with language, and Thank God for that! A wonderful, wonderful poem!
posted by
2902
on September 27, 2010 at 5:01 AM
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just beautiful.........
posted by
spiderfly
on September 27, 2010 at 4:48 AM
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