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Re: "the night breaths fire into the same old dream"
Thank you Rumor, sometimes the pieces won't fit together.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 27, 2010 at 9:49 AM
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"the night breaths fire into the same old dream"
and sometimes we're happy for it while at other times we dread it...and when all is said and done, all we have left are fragments.
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posted by
Rumor
on September 27, 2010 at 8:17 AM
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Re: CC
I think you have stoked enough fires Femia
posted by
C_C_T
on September 26, 2010 at 11:12 PM
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Thank you John this is the sort of poem that one writes and then screams no it not readable forgetting it was not just pushed on to paper like one usually does. If you like it, that's good enough for me.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 26, 2010 at 11:08 PM
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CC
Let me stoke your fire in the dreams of the night to awaken in a tender moment of time..A very romantic poem for one to be amused by a muse. Blessings Femia
posted by
fememefeme
on September 26, 2010 at 6:14 PM
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Dear Mr Bricks:I don't know whether you're honning your art or if I'm just getting senile, but this is my kind of poem, and it's almost perfectly written. You start with an ellusive idea/feeling, making it real by naming and identifying it (fragment:/: muse :/: the fluttering of paper). So, I'm expecting something seemless here, and you don't dissapoint.
This is a compact poem because it's a compact thought. Would like to say more, but it would take me a week to write. Especially like last stanza: "The night breathes fire into the same old dream". That might explan any one of us who would aspire to write,
posted by
jfm32
on September 26, 2010 at 12:50 PM
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