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Loved the ending :)
posted by
screaming_heart
on September 28, 2010 at 7:56 PM
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Interesting poem--a lttle off-beat on the rhythm (but carrying the stacattos of rap). Was wondering where it was going, and liked the turn into ambiguity, while seemingly remaining concret. Kind of like watching someone doing a painting, and how the last brush strokes could change the whole direction of a picture, and leave me wondering.
posted by
jfm32
on September 26, 2010 at 9:58 AM
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