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How true about the palestinian and the Jew.  No other words could be more true.  I'm impressed with the flow of your words. MichuudBlaine

posted by michaudblaine on October 2, 2010 at 5:15 PM | link to this | reply

I wonder how often this happens.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on September 26, 2010 at 4:25 PM | link to this | reply

How sad....beautifully and vividly written!

posted by Nita09 on September 26, 2010 at 11:00 AM | link to this | reply

I don't see anyhing political here either. It's the allegory of love and circumstance--Romeo and Julliette-- and that was just about feuidng families. But the problem of love and mixed marriges and the chasm of cultures is not endemnic to just this stituation. Just consider (before eccumenism) Catholics and Protestants, Genitle and Jews, not to mention Greeks and Turks. So I think your theme is quite universal. There are a lot of things cultural that separate us--even our own personalities.

posted by jfm32 on September 26, 2010 at 10:58 AM | link to this | reply

Tzippy, this , or something similar, happened to a friend of mine.  When she told me,  the sadness of what could have been and would never be  stayed with me...  and last night while having an attack of the "poor me, poor me" , (ungrateful that I am :-)), I realized how lucky I had been that I  was free to choose and love whomever I so wished . I wrote it as a tribute to all those budding loves that because of circunstances created by life can never be, not as a political statement,  though  after reading it again I guess it does make a point.

posted by Sinome on September 26, 2010 at 6:55 AM | link to this | reply

Very good! A glimpse of probable truth!

posted by Ariala on September 26, 2010 at 6:48 AM | link to this | reply

So nicely done Simone and it used to be so in all walks of life.

posted by C_C_T on September 26, 2010 at 12:11 AM | link to this | reply

I hope that one day we will be free of all this and love naturally again without fear.

posted by spiderfly on September 26, 2010 at 12:10 AM | link to this | reply

I would like to know the inspiration behind this poem
because its personal and important to me...... was that inspired by a thought, or by a real moment? etc etc.

posted by Tzippy on September 25, 2010 at 11:38 PM | link to this | reply