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CC - I don't know of a conscience bearer - like one, a soul, with extreme empathy and reaching out...this was quite a poem and thoughtful. I found it very enlightening and alluring. EE
posted by
elysianfields
on September 27, 2010 at 6:36 PM
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Re: I loved the rhythm
Thank you malcom, back to the grindstone
posted by
C_C_T
on September 26, 2010 at 10:33 AM
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Re: FSI
Thank you Wiley well you wouldn't want to get fresh with your housekeeper at this stage. Leave the ladies to Kabu and you can always borrow the wings.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 26, 2010 at 10:31 AM
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I loved the rhythm
of this piece.
posted by
malcolm
on September 26, 2010 at 9:42 AM
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FSI
That was awesome as some would say. I knew it, fallen angel, perfect at a time when I'm dealing with a housekeeper who talks of her demons, Fly over here man, and touch this housekeeper with the tip of your pink wing, the one with the .44cal tucked up under there.LOL
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 26, 2010 at 7:08 AM
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Thank you John, I feel like a brick layer and you are the architect, describing the building. I am afraid I'll always put one or two bricks in the wrong place, but as long as it doesn't fall down.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 26, 2010 at 12:04 AM
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Yes Taps I agree but I thought it would be more appropriate than a soul bearer
posted by
C_C_T
on September 25, 2010 at 11:52 PM
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Re: Narration that reflects the perception and the conscience
Thank you SF. I bet you have a beautiful conscience.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 25, 2010 at 11:50 PM
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Re: The conscence Bearer
Now Femia don't get saucy any distinguishing features?
posted by
C_C_T
on September 25, 2010 at 11:48 PM
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Re: CORNCAKE
Yes Bill one of my jokes to a rather staid schoolmaster as I explained the origin of plant names. This big plant had seeds like peas, And I said the first person to name it must have said yes we will call it a pea on ee.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 25, 2010 at 11:45 PM
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Thank you Simone He is very handy.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 25, 2010 at 11:41 PM
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wow you are so creative with your topics CC... Loved this one :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on September 25, 2010 at 9:23 PM
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CORNCAKE
S Flowers are sure symbolic sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on September 25, 2010 at 8:10 PM
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The conscence Bearer
Your poem the Bearer of good news. The intricacies of our conscious is really the right and wrongs of our decisions. We create what is comfortable and assign it to our conscience bearer.Quite interesting and very nicely done Mr. MB..Computer is running good I see from this posting. Femia Pal Lady in the mirror ha! ha !
posted by
fememefeme
on September 25, 2010 at 7:33 PM
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Narration that reflects the perception and the conscience
posted by
Straightforward
on September 25, 2010 at 7:10 PM
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That's quite a poem.
I would think it would be a difficult task to be a conscience bearer. Some of them must be quite cumbersome, especially those that have not been clear for some time.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 25, 2010 at 5:58 PM
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The conscience adds so much to the poem. Like the speaker I believe that a conscience can recover...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 25, 2010 at 4:12 PM
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Wow! While I sometimes lost the meter, the intracacies of this poem win out. Love the theme and its (more or less) conversational approach with an "inner voice" --and juxtaposion into the world of life experience while the ideal changes and subtley keeps its balance. Wonderful dramatic tension between what we might begin with and how we work it out. "Mothing ss planned", but in this case good enough. The question you raise (and somehow resolve) taps into all of us.
posted by
jfm32
on September 25, 2010 at 11:21 AM
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