Go to Martas poems
- Add a comment
- Go to In the forest...
Wow. What a line-- "to feel the tremors of a thousand hearts". Lines like this really confuse my ticker.
posted by
jfm32
on September 25, 2010 at 12:12 PM
| link to this | reply
Sinome, that is truly an experience we should all have....
..
...
posted by
Rumor
on September 25, 2010 at 8:46 AM
| link to this | reply
posted by
Nita09
on September 25, 2010 at 8:09 AM
| link to this | reply
A very nice poem Simone, I don't know if I would want to be there on my own unless I was in a stout log cabin, but I expect you are braver than I am.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 25, 2010 at 7:26 AM
| link to this | reply
I could lay on the floor but I would never get up again
posted by
Lanetay
on September 24, 2010 at 11:14 PM
| link to this | reply
Sinome
. Wondrous imagery that changes awesomely into psychology. You handle both beautifully. It comes out as smooth enchantment love. I love you. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on September 24, 2010 at 10:54 PM
| link to this | reply
Sinome
The deep forest is the enchantment of the forest as your poem. Blessings Femia
posted by
fememefeme
on September 24, 2010 at 7:55 PM
| link to this | reply
The forest is the perfect scene for this.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 24, 2010 at 7:33 PM
| link to this | reply