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WOW! This is one fine poem! It brought so many memories to the forefront! So many! Love it when a poem does that! KUDOS!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 21, 2010 at 10:06 AM
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Thank you lionreign just hit the button sometimes.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 21, 2010 at 8:04 AM
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Thank you csherloc,
posted by
C_C_T
on September 21, 2010 at 8:03 AM
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wow, what brilliant imagery, I loved this poem
posted by
lionreign
on September 21, 2010 at 7:54 AM
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Beautiful reflections CORNCAKE from the beginning to the end.
posted by
csherloc
on September 21, 2010 at 5:18 AM
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I guess so Jay you know what's it's all about
posted by
C_C_T
on September 21, 2010 at 12:41 AM
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Re: Wonderful way of looking at things
Thank you Malcolm, one feels happy to some days.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 21, 2010 at 12:40 AM
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Yes FS sometimes one does catch a falling star and not realise it until it fades.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 21, 2010 at 12:38 AM
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Thank you Wiley I was thinking when I came across these, it is the sort your dear little Kabu likes .
posted by
C_C_T
on September 21, 2010 at 12:36 AM
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Thank you Bill still looking
posted by
C_C_T
on September 21, 2010 at 12:35 AM
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Thannk you Sam it hardly seems fair you are always so nice to people and I well you know
posted by
C_C_T
on September 21, 2010 at 12:33 AM
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Wow CC! The close was awesome and the last couplet simply superb! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 20, 2010 at 10:02 PM
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Re: errata: CORNCAKE
posted by
BC-A
on September 20, 2010 at 9:46 PM
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cripfemme
J That’s a clever, artistic, and deep way of looking at a person sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
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BC-A
on September 20, 2010 at 9:46 PM
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CORNCRAKE
I thought as I read and re-read this poetic piece tonight you have a labyrinthian mind, that takes us on the most interesting voyages of thought my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 20, 2010 at 8:27 PM
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Our dreams can get us through so much. I hope that for the speaker's sake that the reality will soon match the dreams.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 20, 2010 at 8:19 PM
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Wonderful way of looking at things
and you articulate it so well
posted by
malcolm
on September 20, 2010 at 12:25 PM
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CC - first off, I adore your writing(s) --- and this is another divine piece I might add. The imagery, from the beginning with the 'petal' not coming together and then broken doll - pieces and fragments. I'm amazed at your vivid imagery gift. This particular writing simply touched my heart. Soft, as a memory of childhood - and today, maybe more, I find the lift of (my) childlike spirit 'safe' protected and shielded by hope of brighter presence- Warm and delightful and one of my favorites ~ EE
posted by
elysianfields
on September 20, 2010 at 10:20 AM
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very nice C.C. the flickering moons, the uncared for times and the secrets we all long to know...
posted by
UtahJay
on September 20, 2010 at 10:04 AM
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