Go to WRITING by poetjpb
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I couldn't help but notice that this hand wore a diamond ring the size of the state of Texas. The glitter from the diamond was so bright it shone in brilliant gleams of star-like patterns and it would have blinded me but, I put my hand over my brows and a slight furrow was evident (I realized) because my reflection from my driver's windowpane was looking back at me. The driver of this limousine had put down the passenger side window of the car and he was speaking something, his lips mouthing words that I wanted to hear. I rolled down my window quickly but not soon enough. The light changed, horns were honking and off the car, long and black and shiny, zoomed off into the sunshine. I resumed my composure along with the slow speed of my car. I was lost in thought; wondering just who was in that car when this sports car quickly (times up)
Yes, Poet this is hard yet, a very good practice. Thank you for the challenge. Elyse 
posted by
elysianfields
on September 27, 2010 at 7:41 PM
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Re: ohhh I want more.....
more? like write 5 more minutes worth? sheeesh ~ that's fun. Let me try now...
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on September 27, 2010 at 7:34 PM
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ohhh I want more.....
posted by
poetjpb
on September 17, 2010 at 7:00 PM
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The black car came zooming by and my eyesight blurred. I could not make out the driver only three people that were staring back at me, focusing on them. The three riding in the back seat were of short stature. I could not really make out their faces as the windows were tinted in this car. I think this black car with blackened windows was indeed a limousine. Yes, once my vision became unobscured by the rush of its sudden approach' and then a stop at the red light, I was inquisitive and inched my vehicle just a bit
more to the yellow cross-walk line. The driver looked at me suspiciously and then, I saw one hand from
the back in a waving gesture..and
*times up...this was fun PoetJpB and I would be curious to see what you and others come up; it's harder than one thinks. It's hard to not go back over and re-invent or scratch this and re-write...WOW what a good teaching and learning skill this is. Thank you ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on September 17, 2010 at 3:42 PM
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Great exercise; I shall give it a whirl! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 17, 2010 at 2:04 AM
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