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What a cozy place to lie - and nature I'm sure would dearly comfort you always CC. The trickle and lull then flow you describe of golden moments when revived is simply summed up divinely with "I cannot do more" ~ that's an inspiration as I've not witnessed before. My Mamma would say, "let it be" - Another great one, how you do write so very well. EE
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elysianfields
on September 17, 2010 at 12:57 PM
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Re: SAm
Hi Sam thank you, it was not meant to be sensuous as you realized.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 17, 2010 at 7:55 AM
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Poignant imagery CC and I liked the comfort of lying on the breast, too! It does give it a humane feel even in an inhumane world at times or even so on situations! Very nice imagery that is highly thought provoking, too! sam
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sam444
on September 17, 2010 at 2:45 AM
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Re: CORNCAKE
HI Bill think like a poor man when you are rich and you will remain poor
posted by
C_C_T
on September 16, 2010 at 10:41 PM
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Re: CC
Thank you so much Femia you are sweet friend
posted by
C_C_T
on September 16, 2010 at 10:38 PM
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CC
Clinging to something and never let go as your poem tells me the pain one feel when giving birth..to endure and never let go for life is persistance and sometimes desolate..What we feel as one leans upon the breast for a mothers comfort. Nice job CC Pal Fema
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fememefeme
on September 16, 2010 at 8:27 PM
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CORNCAKE
' I lie in your breast is a good line sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
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BC-A
on September 16, 2010 at 6:00 PM
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