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Re: the air has teeth wow what a way with words
Thanks Tzippy

posted by lionreign on September 17, 2010 at 11:47 AM | link to this | reply

the air has teeth wow what a way with words
now i am visualizing air with huge teeth, I dont think I will think of air the same way again

posted by Tzippy on September 17, 2010 at 11:19 AM | link to this | reply

Re: sam444
Thank you so much dear friend, I am glad that you relate

posted by lionreign on September 17, 2010 at 9:52 AM | link to this | reply

Re: A Final Breath
Thank you so much LadybugJudy

posted by lionreign on September 17, 2010 at 9:50 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome
Thanks sweetie, I must aknowledge that Autumn and even Winter have their beauties but I cannot help but miss the tenderness of Spring or the softness of Summer...  the cold months are so remote

posted by lionreign on September 17, 2010 at 9:50 AM | link to this | reply

Re: lionreign
Thanks Bill, glad you liked it

posted by lionreign on September 17, 2010 at 9:47 AM | link to this | reply

Re: I turned our heating up too
Spirits seem to be more difficult then the flesh

posted by lionreign on September 17, 2010 at 9:45 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Corncrake
Thank you, I would be delighted to be wrong

posted by lionreign on September 17, 2010 at 9:41 AM | link to this | reply

What a cool poem! And it is just about over here too. Although today is 91F, it will probably be summer's last breath as it were! Absolutely awesome imagery! sam 

posted by sam444 on September 17, 2010 at 2:51 AM | link to this | reply

A Final Breath
wonderful poem..I loved it..

posted by MsJudy on September 17, 2010 at 12:05 AM | link to this | reply

FAbulous poem... A tribute to summer :-)  I am sorry sweetie... that you season its coming to an end... but there are beautiful sights and lovely smells of Autumn too...  Just let your mind open up to see :-)  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on September 16, 2010 at 7:18 PM | link to this | reply

lionreign

' The air teeth’s original. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on September 16, 2010 at 6:20 PM | link to this | reply

I turned our heating up too
but it hasn't warmed my spirit. Nice verse

posted by malcolm on September 16, 2010 at 12:21 PM | link to this | reply

Good writing but I hope you are wrong lionriegn. I did put the heating on today though. 

posted by C_C_T on September 16, 2010 at 10:19 AM | link to this | reply