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This was a delightful read! KUDOS!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 16, 2010 at 4:51 PM
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Spiderfly
A wonderful web you wove with the intricities of a busy life filled with excitement as I read every word written and to have the time to write with this schedule is what I agree with CC..While he read his old manuscripts we read your lovely poem. Blessings Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on September 16, 2010 at 8:45 AM
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well thank you all for the compliments and yes it is quick fun writing mr cc. I thought i needed to go up tempo and show my not so serious side.
posted by
spiderfly
on September 16, 2010 at 8:31 AM
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Hahahaha I agree with 2902
It is like Dr. Suess on steroids. What a fun piece!
posted by
Bel_
on September 16, 2010 at 6:47 AM
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Delightful! - like Dr. Seuss on steroids!
posted by
2902
on September 16, 2010 at 6:28 AM
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Well this spider( Spiderfly) surly knows how to rhyme.
posted by
csherloc
on September 16, 2010 at 4:30 AM
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Hi lauren I think this is a poem where you just grabbed a piece of paper and wrote. In a way if I am right of course it is relaxing. I was reading only yesterday about an older poet whose manuscripts were found and drafts of poems as if they were to be planned and drawn up clinically. Of course probably immaculate when finished but it sounds boring.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 16, 2010 at 12:23 AM
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