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~ beautiful poignant poetry here Shobana - and I hum that song now. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on September 18, 2010 at 9:03 AM
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posted by
Justi
on September 17, 2010 at 1:33 PM
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Nice poem
and also a memory of a song of the same name that a former girlfiriend loved
posted by
malcolm
on September 16, 2010 at 12:54 PM
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Very thoughtful and interesting poem, have to read a few more times. You have me thinking about this.
posted by
csherloc
on September 16, 2010 at 5:38 AM
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shobana
Q Certainly you know how to feel peace love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on September 16, 2010 at 12:12 AM
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Using until in refrain was superb! I hope you have a marvelous weekend my Shobana and I send my love x's a zillion, too! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on September 15, 2010 at 11:01 PM
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Shobana
Now that you've left us the essence of your poetic talent, enjoy your time away darlin'.
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 15, 2010 at 8:59 PM
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Awesome verse, Dear Shobana!
posted by
Katray2
on September 15, 2010 at 3:48 PM
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I always liked the song by that name.
Now I like your poem too.
See you when you return.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 15, 2010 at 3:21 PM
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posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on September 15, 2010 at 12:19 PM
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Life goes on....and is to be lived!
posted by
mariss9
on September 15, 2010 at 11:54 AM
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I find this to be such a beautiful poem with a sadness of in it.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 15, 2010 at 11:31 AM
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Rich in content Shobana sunshine is for the brave really enjoyed this. Take care.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 15, 2010 at 10:38 AM
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Reminded me of tje good ole "Until the twelfth of never, I long to
be loved by you.'
posted by
Straightforward
on September 15, 2010 at 8:50 AM
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lovely tune
, take care
posted by
Lanetay
on September 15, 2010 at 8:37 AM
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I love your imagery here, it's just beautiful
posted by
lionreign
on September 15, 2010 at 5:47 AM
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