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Re: Re: E.E

Honey you say?  Well now...maybe we should talk.

LOL - today I just bought yet 2 more jars of honey.  I am feeling much like Winnie the Pooh bear here.  ~ that photo came from a borrowed stash.  I head back in the morning to E. Texas, so bear with me if I don't read for a day - or get behind.  EE

posted by elysianfields on September 15, 2010 at 8:56 PM | link to this | reply

How tragic!  Beautiful poem none the less

posted by lionreign on September 15, 2010 at 5:32 AM | link to this | reply

 - glad to see you are still writing.

posted by _Symphony_ on September 15, 2010 at 5:11 AM | link to this | reply

Drat on the reality of life! Just when it was so close, it was so far away! sam 

posted by sam444 on September 14, 2010 at 11:43 PM | link to this | reply

Re: CC
Dear Femia you are always so kind, I am really honored to be your friend

posted by C_C_T on September 14, 2010 at 11:39 PM | link to this | reply

Re: E.E
Thank you E.E. Where ever did you find it, I would swop it for six jars of honey. 

posted by C_C_T on September 14, 2010 at 11:34 PM | link to this | reply

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Well Simone you have only to walk that tiny golden bridge and I will enfold you in a dream.

posted by C_C_T on September 14, 2010 at 11:32 PM | link to this | reply

Re: C.C....this is truly an emotional roller coaster experience...
It was always the way Rumor but the glows mount up eventually

posted by C_C_T on September 14, 2010 at 11:26 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Marvellous
Well Malcolm, I guess things mean different experiences to some people. I suppose the real art would be to write so everyone would understand what it meant. Like a
politician  

posted by C_C_T on September 14, 2010 at 11:24 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you Jay disturbing some-times though

posted by C_C_T on September 14, 2010 at 11:18 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you Shobana I did feel a bit mean shoveling them up but one has to be so ruthless these days. Happy dreams. 

posted by C_C_T on September 14, 2010 at 11:16 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Infatuation to rejection, superbly sketched in a whirl! - Ash
It happens Ash perhaps not a good idea though

posted by C_C_T on September 14, 2010 at 11:09 PM | link to this | reply

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Yes the resut a sad poem FS.

posted by C_C_T on September 14, 2010 at 11:08 PM | link to this | reply

Re: CORNCAKE
Thank you Bill I'm with you

posted by C_C_T on September 14, 2010 at 11:06 PM | link to this | reply

CORNCAKE

P A poem full of force sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJJst

posted by BC-A on September 14, 2010 at 8:07 PM | link to this | reply

I can just feel the pain of all the excitement only to find that it was all for naught.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on September 14, 2010 at 7:01 PM | link to this | reply

Infatuation to rejection, superbly sketched in a whirl! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on September 14, 2010 at 6:21 PM | link to this | reply

How poignantly beautiful CC..and those moments I'm sure was precious and yes I saw the crabs in your previous poem.

posted by shobana on September 14, 2010 at 4:46 PM | link to this | reply

A moment of infatuation in the eye, forever on the mind, very nice.

posted by UtahJay on September 14, 2010 at 2:03 PM | link to this | reply

Marvellous
this actually made me think of listening to an album by Bread - funny how your words remind me of those lyrics

posted by malcolm on September 14, 2010 at 11:09 AM | link to this | reply

C.C....this is truly an emotional roller coaster experience...

so close, and yet so far...you describe her in such great detail, and yet she remains aloof...words like "illusion", "cocoon of mystery", "dream walk" all remind us all remind us to look again, look closer....

at least you experience the "soft warm glow" for a few moments before the realization her smile is for another.....

posted by Rumor on September 14, 2010 at 11:01 AM | link to this | reply

SO ...so sweet the way you express your feelings and the tender way in which you see her... I am so jelaous :-)  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on September 14, 2010 at 9:53 AM | link to this | reply

 CC this captured my heart.  Such sweet thoughts and I hope you caught some:  'cause your muse was shedding such tender light. EE

posted by elysianfields on September 14, 2010 at 8:21 AM | link to this | reply

CC
Sometimes when we window shop we see what we want and discover the pound in ones pocket isn't enough but we still know what it is to want something that is impossible at the time. Your use of words paint the picture in desire and I admire your words always. Pal friend Femia

posted by fememefeme on September 14, 2010 at 7:52 AM | link to this | reply