Go to C.C.
- Add a comment
- Go to Raw emotion
I like how you play up to taste imagery. Often when it comes to the senses taste tends to get lost, I feel.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 9, 2010 at 3:59 PM
| link to this | reply
Felt the 'rawness' of emotion here CC and it was good, handled with 'ease' and alluring...I must admit I visit 'emotions' every day and these - this rawness held my attention. Great writing... EE
posted by
elysianfields
on September 9, 2010 at 10:11 AM
| link to this | reply
"tears scorched to ashes are sprinkled to the wind"...
now there is raw emotions outcome, and the labyrinth of the mind wants to hold onto so much of this within (no wonder our minds need to be swept clean at times)...those emotions can cure us, or kill us..
.
...
posted by
Rumor
on September 9, 2010 at 7:44 AM
| link to this | reply
Re: CORNCAKE
YES Bill went a bit mad, thought it might be banned.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 8, 2010 at 11:35 PM
| link to this | reply
Re: CC
It is your fault Femia I was intoxicated by your wine testing, but what are friends for
posted by
C_C_T
on September 8, 2010 at 11:34 PM
| link to this | reply
Re: Sam
No Sam, I rarely get headaches it was just cloudy, I had so many to write to and I felt that I could not write anything again, I just thought it's only words, what the ***** and then I felt different. My brother was mending one one my computers and it was getting on my nerves. He was reinstalling Windows and kept grumbling because I had not kept the disks in one place. Anyway he's finished it and said he's saved me x number of pounds as he wanted to build me a new one.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 8, 2010 at 11:32 PM
| link to this | reply
It is very depictive of raw emotion! I saw you had a headache, I pray it is not of the migraine variety! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 8, 2010 at 10:07 PM
| link to this | reply
CC
Raw emotions to be tasted when all else fails the sweetness of victory within..very deep writing Mr. MB..I thing your glass of wine needs to be refilled. Blessings my dearFriend Fema. Thank you for reading my wine story poem and day dreaming
posted by
fememefeme
on September 8, 2010 at 8:31 PM
| link to this | reply
CORNCAKE
R Similarly to a lot that goes on between the tissue there’s substance between your lines of poetry sir . BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on September 8, 2010 at 4:02 PM
| link to this | reply