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Re: Re: Re: elysianfields

My pleasure. I'd have been disturbed if you had known - I got the information from a drugs counsellor I know...

posted by lionreign on September 7, 2010 at 10:27 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: elysianfields

and I do believe it would be 'heavy' ~ Lion I appreciate your response. I am not up to date in most of the new but, I appreciate you enlightening me is all.

Elyse (I had to look it up...because I wanted to know more of this 'color' LOL)

posted by elysianfields on September 7, 2010 at 9:29 AM | link to this | reply

Re: lionreign

Thanks Bill!

posted by lionreign on September 7, 2010 at 8:30 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sam444

Thanks Sam, definitely a metaphor although it has more depth on reading it back than I first realised

posted by lionreign on September 7, 2010 at 8:29 AM | link to this | reply

Re: elysianfields

thanks Elyse, I used Ketamine to give a sense of drugged heaviness

posted by lionreign on September 7, 2010 at 8:26 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Corncrake

Thank you! It's amazing what can inspire romantic poetry... in this case the overall these was supplied by Peter Pan

posted by lionreign on September 7, 2010 at 8:20 AM | link to this | reply

Re: lionreign, what a great opening line!

Thanks Rumor - I'm glad you liked it

posted by lionreign on September 7, 2010 at 8:17 AM | link to this | reply

Re: what a sweetie you are with your beautiful loving poetry.

Thank you so much Kabu

posted by lionreign on September 7, 2010 at 8:15 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Lionreign

Thanks Fema

posted by lionreign on September 7, 2010 at 7:59 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Very uplifting, Lion! - Ash

Thanks Ash!!

posted by lionreign on September 7, 2010 at 7:38 AM | link to this | reply

lionreign

NN Aah I love a line of a happy thought. lol. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on September 7, 2010 at 5:08 AM | link to this | reply

On ketamine, I am presuming metaphor (although it can contain a great deal of realism) because of it two fold effect being physical and mental, and I though the imagery to be personal in its own right but easily identifiable to an give reader subsequently doing what I did take it the way my mood suits! But, most striking that even though memories it gives a person the impetus to move forward for that is the only way it can go for me. Well done, indeed! A lot of complexity in it simplicity, but exquisite imagery, it can go deep or be like like the calming water of the surface. I just adore it! sam

posted by sam444 on September 6, 2010 at 11:35 PM | link to this | reply

Lion this has lift and lilt - bouncy and rhythmic - sweet and adoring and the Ketamine haze hmmm... I've never seen that type or color or...

Elyse

posted by elysianfields on September 6, 2010 at 11:57 AM | link to this | reply

It is nice to soar lionriegn once one has learned the trick as you obviously have. I thought this was really a happy poem, we need more of those.

posted by C_C_T on September 6, 2010 at 11:28 AM | link to this | reply

lionreign, what a great opening line!

"You are my happy thought"...what a great way to go through the day with that happy thought of a loved one (a happy thought in themselves) who really cares.