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i llike how
I like how you begin with the dreamy stuff, elevated and move to the ordinary washing dishes at the end
good contrast
posted by
poetjpb
on September 9, 2010 at 11:25 AM
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what a fantastic daydream. Fema, I simply enjoy your writing. It's hearty and full of warmth. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on September 6, 2010 at 5:09 PM
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I do that, even more so when ironing....
posted by
lionreign
on September 6, 2010 at 7:36 AM
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Oh, dear Femia I thought you had a maid to do the washing up. This was a lovely poem, now sweep the chimney. Still friends, MB.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 6, 2010 at 6:56 AM
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fememefeme
. I hope so love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on September 5, 2010 at 10:29 PM
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dream on
You and Lionreign manage these wonderful surprise endings in such a short space! What a delightful true-feeling poem!
posted by
2902
on September 5, 2010 at 9:54 PM
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You nailed this one feme!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWESOME GIRL!
posted by
aceblade
on September 5, 2010 at 9:43 PM
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