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Re: Re: Re: thingy
Do your worst! I'm ready to interact - or whatever it is we're doing now.
posted by
2902
on September 6, 2010 at 8:31 AM
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Re: Re: thingy
I knew we should not have put that clue in Bob. Prepare for the worst.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 6, 2010 at 6:45 AM
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lovely and evocative
Thank you. Our prof in Romantic Poetry used to say, "Keep it concrete!"
posted by
2902
on September 5, 2010 at 10:10 PM
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Re: galaxy
Thank you - I tried Femme's and Lionreign's tricky "surprise-ending in a dozen lines or less" approach. The scene was our rent-controlled apartment in north Manhattan in 1971. She was gorgeous!
posted by
2902
on September 5, 2010 at 10:05 PM
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This was fabulous imagery! It touched me on all my senses! KUDOS!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 5, 2010 at 9:41 PM
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Lovely and evocative. Nice work!
posted by
Pat_B
on September 5, 2010 at 2:45 PM
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Re: thingy
BEACH DIG! Now that's more like it! I may like it better than GI JACK FLED! The neat thing about thingies is that they're truly interactive. Good and good!
posted by
2902
on September 5, 2010 at 12:38 PM
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I don't know what that other comment was loll... but I loved this poem... xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on September 5, 2010 at 11:53 AM
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1 Ray A wine shark Vital Clue Archaeology at the sea side.
2 Grey B Drop of golden sun
3 Portray C Sounds like victims
4 Pray D Not made when it rains
5 Jay E black and white
6 Hay F Elasmobranch
7 Tray G Sounds like a donkey
8 Bray H Blue bird
I Sounds like a characteristic Feature.
J Illegal walking
posted by
C_C_T
on September 5, 2010 at 11:47 AM
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ah yes, the day after the party, there's always the vacuuming up to do..
but, it was a beautiful starlit galaxy while it lasted..
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posted by
Rumor
on September 5, 2010 at 11:12 AM
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Where did you say the stars were Bob. Very good. I have a thingy for you, I will try to copy it out if I can tonight or tomorrow. Please don't get it right or the brother will do a harder one.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 5, 2010 at 9:30 AM
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