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Re: It never gets easier.
Absolutely true Randir, but I live in hope that we grow to deal with it more philosophically
posted by
lionreign
on September 3, 2010 at 7:11 AM
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Re: Sam444
Thanks so much, Sam, it was mostly an empathic piece inspired by another's pain and I am delighted that it worked
posted by
lionreign
on September 3, 2010 at 7:07 AM
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Re: parting
Thanks Bob (2902)
posted by
lionreign
on September 3, 2010 at 7:04 AM
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Re: Sinome
Thank you so much dear... glad you liked it xoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on September 3, 2010 at 6:53 AM
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Re: TAPS
Thank you so much
posted by
lionreign
on September 3, 2010 at 6:39 AM
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Re: parting can be downright heart rending, and you've captured it so well...
Thanks Rumor!
posted by
lionreign
on September 3, 2010 at 6:35 AM
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Re: lionreign
thanks Wiley, I think we've all been there so there's always a place to draw inspiration from
posted by
lionreign
on September 3, 2010 at 6:31 AM
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Re: I am glad you clarified this for me...I was worried...you see you write so
Well I didn't want to worry everyone
posted by
lionreign
on September 3, 2010 at 6:10 AM
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Re: Desperately sad
Thanks malcolm
posted by
lionreign
on September 3, 2010 at 5:59 AM
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Re: Phew.. Glad to know..
Thanks Orcalion, I am glad I captured the essence of it
posted by
lionreign
on September 3, 2010 at 5:50 AM
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It never gets easier.
Disappointment and disillusion, fading of joy, growing dread of realization...
posted by
Randir
on September 3, 2010 at 1:36 AM
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I love it! I thought it captured the essence rather beautifully! Sometimes each need a little more than what is there! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 2, 2010 at 9:02 PM
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parting
Whew!
posted by
2902
on September 2, 2010 at 8:36 PM
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Oh sweeetie... truly an amazing portrait of the sadness of a failed relationship. Very moving Neil. xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on September 2, 2010 at 7:22 PM
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You have really captured the essence of fading love.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 2, 2010 at 3:06 PM
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posted by
TAPS.
on September 2, 2010 at 3:04 PM
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parting can be downright heart rending, and you've captured it so well...
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posted by
Rumor
on September 2, 2010 at 1:02 PM
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lionreign
Well that was imagery that smacked of a lot of truth so that is wonderfully and artfully composed my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 2, 2010 at 12:22 PM
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I am glad you clarified this for me...I was worried...you see you write so
well it all sounds true and I am much comforted that your relationship with your beloved stands firm.
posted by
Kabu
on September 2, 2010 at 10:00 AM
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Desperately sad
posted by
malcolm
on September 2, 2010 at 9:36 AM
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Phew.. Glad to know..
I had started to worry before I got to the last line in bold.. You were right to anticipate because the poem catches the emotion very well..
posted by
orcalion
on September 2, 2010 at 9:11 AM
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