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The poem has beautiful timing love.
posted by
BC-A
on September 4, 2010 at 12:02 AM
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Wonderful poem
Have a great weekend.
posted by
skye08
on September 3, 2010 at 5:06 PM
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Fabulous poem again, Shobana. Your descriptions are second to none.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on September 3, 2010 at 11:10 AM
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Such lovely pictures in words! Enjoy the time with your daughter...I can imagine how you're feeling, but we have to remember it's for her good. Will be in touch.
posted by
Nita09
on September 3, 2010 at 9:02 AM
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I really like this
posted by
Lanetay
on September 2, 2010 at 8:28 PM
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Conveying to us the beauty of all times of the day along with how time feels to us in its various forms.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 2, 2010 at 4:17 PM
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Everything you said in your poem rings true for me! So sad the time together is coming to a close, but I think one can relish the fact that they are off to bigger and better things! Enjoy the precious moments that are left my Shobana and I love you dearly as the sun rises and sets! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on September 2, 2010 at 2:50 PM
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Shobana
Just another lovely poem, you are full to overflowing with them. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on September 2, 2010 at 2:01 PM
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Noon indeed...well done, shobana!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on September 2, 2010 at 1:23 PM
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shobana, have a good weekend....
(I can never make up my mind which is more beautiful, sunrise or sunset? I guess each has its own unique beauty, and I shouldn't try to compare).
....
posted by
Rumor
on September 2, 2010 at 1:19 PM
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Shobana
That was special, like the autrhor and have a happy weekend luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 2, 2010 at 12:43 PM
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Beautiful
and I can picture it so easily
posted by
malcolm
on September 2, 2010 at 11:08 AM
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This is a beautiful poem, I can almost picture the lights coming on as the sun sinks
posted by
lionreign
on September 2, 2010 at 8:36 AM
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Shobana
The love of the Sun rising or falling is a gift and a daughters Love is the Sunrise and sunset of your Heart. I agree with CC he knows a good thing when he read it. Blessings Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on September 2, 2010 at 8:32 AM
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he he; don't believe one word that smooth tongued English rogue writes you
actually you are both so talented you take my breath away.
posted by
Kabu
on September 2, 2010 at 8:18 AM
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Shobana I would love to show you favouritism, don't ever believe otherwise.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 2, 2010 at 7:40 AM
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Re:
I am CC..only my daughter is leaving and I shall miss her. You are most welcome CC, I enjoy reading you, you know that and please don't thank me for the poems. Very nice of you CC, I am truly humbled. Thank you so much for reading me too.
posted by
shobana
on September 2, 2010 at 7:26 AM
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Well it is 3 pm here Shobana Thank you for all your visits and your lovely poems this week. I hope you can be happy
posted by
C_C_T
on September 2, 2010 at 7:22 AM
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