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Thank you
Thanks so much for all your comments here. Much appreciated.
posted by
shobana
on August 30, 2010 at 5:50 AM
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You've achieved
great dramatic tension here I think.
posted by
malcolm
on August 29, 2010 at 4:00 AM
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It was so interesting to read what each comment had to say about your poem. I like a poem that lends to various opinions.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 28, 2010 at 6:26 PM
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Shobana
Working it all out with such creativity luv. Have a happy Sunday
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 28, 2010 at 6:03 PM
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This would be a great poem for anyone mourning a loved one. It speaks so tenderly, yet such sense.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on August 28, 2010 at 6:30 AM
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shobana
The tension in this poem is really great. A plea to move on but when love grabs hold of a person, breaking the grip it has on a person's heart, mind, and soul, is alot easier said than done - which is why I like your poem alot.
posted by
janey_
on August 28, 2010 at 12:21 AM
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shobana
Z I feel like I’ve been on an imaginative journey in poetry love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 27, 2010 at 8:47 PM
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So hard it is to let that person go and be. I think that most if not all of us will struggle with that at some point in our life. You capture the pain of it all so well.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 27, 2010 at 6:40 PM
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IT IS TOUGH WATCHING SOMEONE LEAVE.....I REMEMBER
someone very dear to me once saying how she hated 'planes and airports because they always took her loved ones away.
posted by
Kabu
on August 27, 2010 at 7:15 AM
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Fantastic! Wonderful poem, so poignant
posted by
lionreign
on August 27, 2010 at 7:01 AM
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wow... powerfully done. xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on August 27, 2010 at 6:00 AM
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Let her go
When she is moving towards her intended destination,mind made up, and head upright, then yes,let her go,let her be.
posted by
csherloc
on August 27, 2010 at 4:15 AM
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Letting go is the hardest thing in life I think!
posted by
Nita09
on August 27, 2010 at 2:36 AM
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I can only feel through this poem something disturbing as though the writer is reaching for that elusive answer that evades us all because we do not know what the true question is. If you cried when you wrote this it is beautiful, if you were eating a bacon sandwich. Well I hope it wasn't salty. Thank you for your visits I love them really.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 27, 2010 at 12:49 AM
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Amen! Here's to freedom! I like the message of acceptance in the fact that we can hold others back, we must let them grow and move forward to their own karma! Superb!!! Love you a zillion, too! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on August 26, 2010 at 11:43 PM
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