Comments on A Reader's Guide to Author's Jargon 11

Go to An Author's Life for MeAdd a commentGo to A Reader's Guide to Author's Jargon 11

Re:

Sorry for the typos, but I couldn't find the comment edit function.

 

Ed Patterson

posted by MedicineFlower on August 26, 2010 at 1:31 PM | link to this | reply

Not really inconsistent if you're artful. A coda can be clumsy, but when popped out at a reader it can violate POV rules (which is a western convention). In Outlaws of the Marsh, a great novel of Sung Dynasty action written during the Yuan Dynasty (13th -14th Century), it wasn;t inconsistent at all, but expected. However, Western readers of novels (Johnny come-latelies), are unaccustomed to such closing chapter phrases as:

"Because Timely Rain drank a bucket of wine with Lord P'ing, a thousand swordsmen would rise in defense of the capital walls and a hundred thousand people wold die. Read on for some more."

Western novelist employ the device subtly otherwise we get arrested for POV violations and thrown in reviewer's hoosegows, which is a very dreary and barren place to dwell.

Ed Patterson

 

posted by MedicineFlower on August 26, 2010 at 11:33 AM | link to this | reply

Interesting that there is word to give a veneer of respectability to
inconsistent content!

posted by Straightforward on August 26, 2010 at 8:17 AM | link to this | reply