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Fascinating. Good that the dreamer can wake.
posted by
mariss9
on August 28, 2010 at 10:52 AM
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I forgot these, so sorry! And a little lol...
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posted by
sam444
on August 26, 2010 at 11:41 PM
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Very vivid imagery; I liked how runaway is used but it was like an escape for me, too! And the allure of 'running away' has gripped me from time to time! It's the feeling of freedom and being uninhibited, or even to start anew!
I am just getting out to read for the day! We had high winds forecasted and I spent most of the day getting ready for it to minimize the damage. And, my Jes was in town! She took me to lunch and then we went shopping for clothes for work! She is so tiny, size 3, and the clothes she fits into are so darn cute! How is my darlin' Shobana doing this fine day, aka, fine evening? Love you dearly and for grins this song came to my mind while I was reading your poem, Ive always thought it would be fun to do one day, but not for an extended period as in the song! Love you dearly, too! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on August 26, 2010 at 11:40 PM
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Shobana
Aw my dear girl, the dream seems to have an attachment to your terrible grief over dad. Sooner or later in the fullness of time all the running will stop and you both will be at peace mystically hugging one another, I know.
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 26, 2010 at 7:50 PM
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The Runaway
Nice poem...I enjoyed it very much
posted by
MsJudy
on August 26, 2010 at 3:35 PM
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I am glad that wasn't my dream! It seems quite traumatic and exhausting
posted by
lionreign
on August 26, 2010 at 8:13 AM
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shobana, you've captured well some of the helplessness and hopelessness
of the Runaway...or is the "Runaway" just a dream?..this is a great little poem!.
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posted by
Rumor
on August 26, 2010 at 7:18 AM
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Thank you CC..my internet connection was on and off just now but I read your poem Grit..outstanding CC. is all I can say.
posted by
shobana
on August 26, 2010 at 6:17 AM
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Hi Nita, glad you liked the poem and you are most welcome. I will definitely make it a point to visit but I wish you could come over here visit me too. That would be totaly fantastic. Thank you Nita for your visit.
posted by
shobana
on August 26, 2010 at 5:25 AM
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Hi Nita, glad you liked the poem and you are most welcome. I will definitely make it a point to visit but I wish you could come over here visit me too. That would be totaly fantastic. Thank you Nita for your visit.
posted by
shobana
on August 26, 2010 at 5:25 AM
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Wonderful, specially the ending! Thanks very much for the visits to both blogs and your usual kind comment--do hope you visit with me in person some day!
posted by
Nita09
on August 26, 2010 at 1:43 AM
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Well Shobana I'm not going to try to analyse your dream but it is pretty obvious where the runaway comes into it. This poem forces one along, one wants to know what will happen next. I think it is quite interesting it feels something don't ask me what
posted by
C_C_T
on August 26, 2010 at 12:30 AM
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This is so unusual. It is very interesting you are running away and still
you don't appear to feel as if your are being chased. Let us know if this persist.
posted by
Justi
on August 25, 2010 at 11:17 PM
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shobana
{ I guess that it can rain in the mind. I’m thankful for the sun if there love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 25, 2010 at 11:08 PM
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where are these visions of yours coming from?
posted by
Lanetay
on August 25, 2010 at 10:29 PM
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Hi FSI, know that feeling..thanks much for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on August 25, 2010 at 9:31 PM
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I've had many dreams where I ran and went no where and felt so much relief to have woken up.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 25, 2010 at 7:01 PM
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Shobana
a delightful poem to awake anew.The Runaway. Blessings Fema Sleepyhead dreamer
posted by
fememefeme
on August 25, 2010 at 6:28 PM
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The Runaway
shobana..Loved this poem..it is beautiful
posted by
MsJudy
on August 25, 2010 at 6:08 PM
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you play around with words and we get to thoroughly enjoy the results...
Runaway....very nicely done.
posted by
Kabu
on August 25, 2010 at 5:22 PM
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