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Re: C.C., one can feel the grit in each line..one can sense the desire in his
Thank you Rumour talking of Grits is there some food that cowboys ate called grits perhaps I should ask Bob he's into old films.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 26, 2010 at 7:17 AM
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C.C., one can feel the grit in each line..one can sense the desire in his
heart to know more of her and love her completely, but she constantly throws up "roadblocks" and that "line in the sand" (her reservedness, for whatever reasons it exists) prevents that true love from happening.
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posted by
Rumor
on August 26, 2010 at 6:47 AM
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Re: even the best of relationships and loves can reach a little patch of
Now Kabu you are telling me something I did not know, I thought lovers quarreled all the time
posted by
C_C_T
on August 25, 2010 at 11:10 PM
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Thank you Sam 7:05 am I could do with another of your coffees' no sugar I think I've lost inch off my tummy but I weigh the same perhaps it's gone to my head.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 25, 2010 at 11:08 PM
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Thank you Jay glad that you liked it
posted by
C_C_T
on August 25, 2010 at 11:03 PM
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Re: CORNCAKE
Thanks Bill it wants someone to put him togerther.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 25, 2010 at 11:02 PM
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CORNCAKE
{ A poet puts the pieces together in this poem sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 25, 2010 at 10:58 PM
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One of the best I've read, a wonderful poem
posted by
UtahJay
on August 25, 2010 at 6:39 PM
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What a dynamic close! I adore it to no end! STUNNING!!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 25, 2010 at 4:54 PM
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even the best of relationships and loves can reach a little patch of
quicksand ...beware.
posted by
Kabu
on August 25, 2010 at 12:13 PM
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