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I like the silver net, and I love that it captures dreams
if you want to find your dreams I guess you will have to go into the silver net. I love poems about dreams, no matter what they say, and this poem captured me with its silver net. and now I am a prisoner of that net
posted by
Tzippy
on August 26, 2010 at 6:48 PM
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I can't dream anymore...
Lovely poem..I really enjoyed reading it.
posted by
MsJudy
on August 26, 2010 at 4:09 PM
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Never stop dreaming. Dreams find a path away from hurt and sadness.
Tonight dream again while the Moon Net is swing low and soft.
posted by
Justi
on August 25, 2010 at 11:23 PM
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dreams seem to be a theme
posted by
Lanetay
on August 25, 2010 at 10:30 PM
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So sad it would be to lose one's dreams.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 25, 2010 at 7:47 PM
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May you find dreams again tonight sweet friend because darling dreams are
what give us hope and life taught me ...even at the darkest hour there is hope.
posted by
Kabu
on August 25, 2010 at 12:49 PM
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Sinome
Lovely poem 'comme toujours' and I really loved this description.
"...Within the never empty streets
alabaster buildings seem to glow ....."
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 25, 2010 at 12:03 PM
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Poignant as always!
posted by
Nita09
on August 25, 2010 at 8:33 AM
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woah... that last two lines had a lot of impact
just as I was lulled by the beauty, the stark bluntness of them was incredibly effective - well done!! xoxoxoxoxxo
posted by
lionreign
on August 25, 2010 at 8:07 AM
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Well Simone I really think it is wiser to make one's own dreams. I expect you dream and don't remember the dream, which is sometimes much kinder. Well you are more gentle than I am you might always have had nice dreams if you miss them. Nice poem
posted by
C_C_T
on August 25, 2010 at 7:06 AM
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I can't dream anymore
Great poem----I think you will dream again.
posted by
csherloc
on August 25, 2010 at 4:35 AM
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Sinome
{ An intriguing cityscape with both awesome and lovely night vision love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 24, 2010 at 10:40 PM
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It would be terrible to not dream anymore Sinome, may there be endless dreams. This poem is just so poignantly touching. Thank you for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on August 24, 2010 at 9:35 PM
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