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White is the perfect color for you to have used for this poem!
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 25, 2010 at 7:01 PM
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White is representative of purity for me and so it benefits the imagery tremendously! I want to have my final rest, or a commencement as it were in fluffs of white! Striking imagery my Shobana! I saw your reply to CC, it is a brave thing to accept the inevitable, especially when the suffering had to end! Just know you are a fine daughter and I know he loved you dearly; like I do--even to a Zillion! Your sam
x's a million, trillion, zillion, lol!
posted by
sam444
on August 25, 2010 at 1:30 PM
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Shobana
The word blessed comes to mind, and your dad was so blessed to have you and his grandchildren and this lovely tribute for him.
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 25, 2010 at 12:34 PM
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Just lovely, thank you for sharing
posted by
lionreign
on August 25, 2010 at 8:22 AM
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Exquisitely beautiful as always Shobana! Thanks very much for your visit. Hope all's well.
posted by
Nita09
on August 25, 2010 at 8:16 AM
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In the white
As a man I am trained to downplay my emotions, but I must say,your poem is very touching.
posted by
csherloc
on August 25, 2010 at 4:42 AM
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Re:
Hi CC, no it is not of me or my daughter..it is more of the place of resting for the dead (cemetery). This morning we had dad's ashes put in the columbrium and I was talking of his place of rest. I am not in tears or crying CC..my dad was suffering the last stages and this is best for him. I just couldn't take him suffering anymore. I love him so very much but this is all for the best.
Thank you my friend, now you have a lovely day reading and commenting with your wit and humor.
posted by
shobana
on August 25, 2010 at 12:44 AM
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Lovely poem Shobana If it is about yourself it must be tears if it about your daughter it is memories anyway it is very emotional
posted by
C_C_T
on August 25, 2010 at 12:30 AM
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Interesting question
posted by
Lanetay
on August 24, 2010 at 11:03 PM
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shobana
{ This poem is pure love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 24, 2010 at 10:51 PM
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Beautifully expressed Shobana... perhaps her essence will be what "is" once she is gone... no colors just that essence that was and always will be :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on August 24, 2010 at 9:29 PM
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