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beautiful
I have no other words to describe this poem, just "beautiful"
posted by
lionreign
on August 25, 2010 at 8:38 AM
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Thank you Shobana I wrote this after reading your tribute, I suppose it brought back memories and then I had to write the fun one to return to normal. Not very often one can do this and I appreciate your advice. You are very sweet.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 25, 2010 at 12:07 AM
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Thank you Simone, I guess we all get that feeling sometime in life, it is always nice to have friends.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 11:58 PM
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I'm not a poet Janey I just write verse at times, sometimes to try to find out, well things
thank you.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 11:56 PM
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I'm not a poet Janey I just write verse at times, sometimes to try to find out, well things
thank you.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 11:56 PM
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I'm not a poet Janey I just write verse at times, sometimes to try to find out, well things
thank you.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 11:56 PM
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Thank you Sam nice to see you back again
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 11:53 PM
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I know Kabu that was awful the first visitor, so sad, I sometimes think of that Shss
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 11:51 PM
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thank you FS It is always painful to exploit some one who was once oneself
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 11:49 PM
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Thank you Romakay.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 11:46 PM
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Well Wiley I didn't really want any one to feel sad, but I guess we never truly forget.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 11:45 PM
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Thank you Taps lots of happy memories for you I hope.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 11:44 PM
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Re: Woe (I feel) artfully expressed
Thank you Katray for what ever that means
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 11:42 PM
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How very sad CC..you have written such a beautiful poem CC. Thank you for stopping by and for your concern and words of comfort. There is a line in this magnificent poem you wrote that touched me..how does one bring about bliss when in pain? It is quite easy CC,,it happens when you know pain that you understand another's pain and in turn try so hard to bring about happiness, laughter and bliss for one - it is all in the "giving".
posted by
shobana
on August 24, 2010 at 9:53 PM
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Bravo my friend "With misery not for myself, but for the crumbling of dreams" Amazingly said xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on August 24, 2010 at 9:34 PM
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You are a wonderful poet. Very sad but beautiful poem.
posted by
janey_
on August 24, 2010 at 9:25 PM
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There is sadness, but I love how you arranged the imagery! It has a universal feel to, so many can relate! I think that makes a poem great! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 24, 2010 at 7:13 PM
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sometimes it all just pops unbidden into the head and one wishes they
hadn't ...back then. Such thoughts are regret and sadness.
posted by
Kabu
on August 24, 2010 at 6:57 PM
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I cannot imagine what it would feel like to have one's dreams completely trouble. Even during my darkest days I always had
something to hope for.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 24, 2010 at 5:17 PM
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There is so much to think about in your poetry. Often you send me back into my memories of yesterdays and people and places that have always been important to me.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 24, 2010 at 3:54 PM
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posted by
RomaKay
on August 24, 2010 at 2:38 PM
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CORNCRAKE
"One sad beacon flickering" that kinda jumped out at me, I felt that I was once that in my life, after my former wife died of brain cancer. Great poet you are old chap.
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 24, 2010 at 12:39 PM
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Woe (I feel) artfully expressed
Well done, CC..
posted by
Katray2
on August 24, 2010 at 11:52 AM
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Hi femia well it did make me sad to write it so I had to do a cheeky one straight away to restore the balance. Hope that you are happy
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 11:10 AM
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CC
I just posted a comment on your poem and when I finished up popped another verse of Not back yet..I'm back and your verse as usual is not sad only a creative word for one to ponder upon, savor and enjoy. Friend Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on August 24, 2010 at 10:27 AM
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