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superbly described
you make the scene vivid and entirely human
posted by
lionreign
on August 25, 2010 at 7:24 AM
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Aww - shot down...but with class. You showed us the memory very well. She's not the only one who is a good writer - so is the 'zippo' man.
posted by
adnohr
on August 24, 2010 at 11:01 PM
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dreamboat
Outta my league. She once confided to someone - not me - that she was looking for a man who "could support her in the manner to which she'd like to become accustomed." (cf the red Cammaro ) But this stuff really happened! It makes for pleasant memories and the kind of stories that improve with each re-telling. PS - She was quite a writer.
posted by
2902
on August 24, 2010 at 9:53 AM
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Go on Bob flex a muscle you were a dreamboat.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2010 at 7:22 AM
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Re: good work
Thanks. This one was fun!
posted by
2902
on August 24, 2010 at 5:44 AM
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Re: good work
Thanks. This one was fun!
posted by
2902
on August 24, 2010 at 5:44 AM
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Good work! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on August 24, 2010 at 5:31 AM
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Re: As Cyrano Might Have Said
Thank you! I find I do a lot of crossing out and compressing before posting a poem, but this one seemed to need some length.
posted by
2902
on August 24, 2010 at 5:30 AM
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As Cyrano Might Have Said
I loved the way you presented this story, capturing a very memorable moment in the past.
posted by
csherloc
on August 24, 2010 at 5:22 AM
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