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last line = awesome.

posted by RomaKay on August 24, 2010 at 2:34 PM | link to this | reply

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Beauty is im the eye of the beholder and age is the refinement  of growth as an aged wine the older it gets the better is gets as your writing and the fasinating views of a mature mind Ha! HA!. My Friend What ever age you are you are indeed a Man of facetts as a rare dimond in the rough that has been cut to perfection I Love your wirtings they bring me joy as I visualize every word conveyed in your pen of poetry. Blessings my Friend Fema

posted by fememefeme on August 24, 2010 at 10:24 AM | link to this | reply

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Too late Shobana the die has been cast, alright I would try and chat you up if I were thirty years younger, I suppose, I always liked nice girls until their wedding day. I hope your daughters don't read this.   

posted by C_C_T on August 24, 2010 at 12:11 AM | link to this | reply

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Thank you F.I. first time I've been told that usually pretty strange 

posted by C_C_T on August 24, 2010 at 12:05 AM | link to this | reply

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CC, I was thinking the same thing..something fishy is going on around here..ha..ha...anyway did you not say at one time that you were old?? I'd be careful with what you say to Kabu with getting your facts right..LOL.

posted by shobana on August 24, 2010 at 12:03 AM | link to this | reply

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Thank you Sam At least I know you read them, please read comment on your poem (query)

posted by C_C_T on August 24, 2010 at 12:02 AM | link to this | reply

Re: different or perhapsI am tired...didn't quite get it old chap.
Kabu pretend that I am telling you off. Ladies don't call old codgers, old chap. I think you are a bit sad, please don't lose that little girl that bounces around inside you. I know it is all scary, but I can spare a protective cover to put around you.

posted by C_C_T on August 23, 2010 at 11:59 PM | link to this | reply

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Yes alright Shobana, I didn't want to know anyway, it is probably a beautifull illusion. What is the matter with every one today. I an know going to tell Kabu off for calling me old chap  

   

posted by C_C_T on August 23, 2010 at 11:52 PM | link to this | reply

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One has to keep an open mind Bill

posted by C_C_T on August 23, 2010 at 11:45 PM | link to this | reply

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T6 I guess that it’s the question in poetry sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on August 23, 2010 at 10:13 PM | link to this | reply

I often thought of that too "anything too beautiful" as being an illusion too CC but we can all dream can't we and make believe. Thank you for stopping by and yes in the wee hours actually here..could not sleep, just chatting my girls up..lol and when they drifted off to sleep I wrote a poem..AND I'm not telling on that perfume..NO..not that one (never heard of it anyway).

posted by shobana on August 23, 2010 at 7:24 PM | link to this | reply

different or perhapsI am tired...didn't quite get it old chap.

posted by Kabu on August 23, 2010 at 6:29 PM | link to this | reply

The old adage, if it's too good to be true it probably isn't so good! I love this line: It is just too dangerous to test the original emotion; How utterly true! sam 

posted by sam444 on August 23, 2010 at 5:22 PM | link to this | reply

hey! i enjoyed readin it! ur pretty talented! keep it comin! =)

posted by friskyinsane on August 23, 2010 at 11:38 AM | link to this | reply