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Amazing read with a human connection many will relate, don't give up!!
posted by
Mystereo
on September 30, 2010 at 11:57 PM
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Re: Wow!
Hey!
ty sooo much n im rlly srry to hear bout ur brother...i lost ppl as well but tht's part of life...just remember that he's watchin over u...thts wat i keep tellin myself...
n btw thnx for ur optimistic comment! u just made my day!
i love poetry, n i finally found a way to express myself =)
posted by
friskyinsane
on August 23, 2010 at 9:20 AM
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Wow!
I have been in the same predicament...believe it or not. My brother died in front of me almost a year ago...and I too wished it were me for a while...things get better and you are at the right spot to express yourself with words. Hang in there! Nice poem...very poignant verses. ace
posted by
aceblade
on August 23, 2010 at 9:07 AM
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