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Water is an excellent symbol of purification...Quite the battle it is to swim against the tide.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 23, 2010 at 1:51 PM
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Shobana
I love to swim in a pool, your poetry about it was lovely
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 23, 2010 at 8:32 AM
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excellent poem
It leaves me with much to think about
posted by
lionreign
on August 23, 2010 at 8:32 AM
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I LOVE SWIMMING BUT IT TAKES GREAT COURAGE TO SWIMAGAINST THE TIDE OF A
SOCIETY.
posted by
Kabu
on August 23, 2010 at 7:03 AM
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Lovely and thought provoking, Dear Shobana!
posted by
Katray2
on August 23, 2010 at 6:05 AM
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In a different water
The water more often than not has something good to offer.
posted by
csherloc
on August 23, 2010 at 4:44 AM
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Does sound inviting Shobana!
posted by
Nita09
on August 23, 2010 at 2:33 AM
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Have a nice splash around Shobana. you are brave making a poem out of a swimming pool.
Well it came out alright and is quite likable. Nice thoughts
posted by
C_C_T
on August 22, 2010 at 11:37 PM
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I dont like swimming as I really never learned
posted by
Lanetay
on August 22, 2010 at 11:37 PM
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Hi Shobs
I'm back ... so missed you. This is a lovely scenery painted in poetry. Excellent !
posted by
anib
on August 22, 2010 at 9:09 PM
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Re: In a different water
Thank you LB for your visit, happy you liked the poem.
posted by
shobana
on August 22, 2010 at 8:10 PM
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Re:
Sam - they are off and hence all the last minute preparations sweetie. I did have a good weekend - thank you darling and love you too much.
posted by
shobana
on August 22, 2010 at 8:10 PM
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Well done! The pool does invite! We have had a cool day in the desert but had it been yesterday, I would have been the first one in the pool! I hope you had a fabulous weekend! Are the girls off to college soon? Love you dearly, your sam!
posted by
sam444
on August 22, 2010 at 7:59 PM
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In a different water
Beautiful Shobana...
posted by
MsJudy
on August 22, 2010 at 7:59 PM
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I think tomorrow I will go to the pool and soak it up, a very nice poem, thank you.
posted by
UtahJay
on August 22, 2010 at 6:25 PM
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In a different water. I love the title and the poem was good also. It was something to make you think and appreciate the depth of it. I guess sometimes poets can get to carried away in depth!
posted by
NIGHTWRITE
on August 22, 2010 at 5:39 PM
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