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That was fantastic!!
posted by
calia14
on August 23, 2010 at 2:04 PM
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I know that feeling so well
brilliantly portrayed sweetie xoxoxoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on August 23, 2010 at 8:35 AM
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yes the last line is a master stroke......oris that a mistress stroke. LOL
posted by
Kabu
on August 23, 2010 at 6:58 AM
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Loved the last sentence specially! Thanks very much for your note. Yes, it was an amazing trip--remember, you have to go there with us!
posted by
Nita09
on August 23, 2010 at 2:02 AM
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Sinome
Breathe - and become them "one by one". If you can write about it so eloquently, surely you can do it.
posted by
Troosha
on August 22, 2010 at 8:47 PM
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Hello Princess Marta
It was so very refreshing to read your poem after such a long gap. I loved the expression crying window panes, and the consciousness, you being wanting to become each, and in the last ... I am awake. BEAUTIFUL!!!xoxoxo: -)
posted by
anib
on August 22, 2010 at 7:43 PM
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You make waking up so gentle Sinome..very nice. Je vais tres bien aussi, merci.
posted by
shobana
on August 22, 2010 at 6:07 PM
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Sinome
Very perceptive!
posted by
Nautikos
on August 22, 2010 at 4:22 PM
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I've felt that way too at times...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 22, 2010 at 2:51 PM
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Simone
That does describe waking up perfectly and with your usual creativity luv
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 22, 2010 at 2:32 PM
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This is brilliant my friend.
posted by
lovelyladymonk
on August 22, 2010 at 1:24 PM
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Yes, thought-provoking
posted by
malcolm
on August 22, 2010 at 12:49 PM
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Know the feeling Simone and then it hits you. Nicely put as always.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 22, 2010 at 12:27 PM
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