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Re: It was a wonderful walk in the park
Thanks skye, I am glad you liked it.
posted by
shobana
on August 19, 2010 at 4:53 PM
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Lustorlove, I miss your entries when you don't write and I am around :) Where are they..hope all is fine with you and the fall did not hurt you very bad. Thank you my friend.
posted by
shobana
on August 19, 2010 at 4:31 PM
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Such a tender vignette......
posted by
Troosha
on August 19, 2010 at 3:12 PM
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Well done, shobana!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 19, 2010 at 10:56 AM
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a lot on your mind
posted by
Lanetay
on August 19, 2010 at 10:36 AM
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I hope and pray he finds some playmates, and such friends as he needs! How great when the light reaches through the blinds, I seek it.
posted by
mariss9
on August 19, 2010 at 9:01 AM
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I want to see & meet my friend Shobana! Is it possible?How lovely it would be if we both can take a walk together in Kuala Lumpur 
I am not joking,might visit KL in October. Your imagination & expression are simply superb!
posted by
shamasehar
on August 19, 2010 at 7:45 AM
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Fabulous scene!
I love the way you take us through it and make everything come alive
posted by
lionreign
on August 19, 2010 at 7:11 AM
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Wonderful and giving, Dear Shobana..
posted by
Katray2
on August 19, 2010 at 6:08 AM
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Her Walk
One may feel guilty for non-action, but I think she was right, being a well- meaning positive observer./SCS
posted by
csherloc
on August 19, 2010 at 2:54 AM
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It was a wonderful walk in the park
I enjoyed it very much.
posted by
skye08
on August 19, 2010 at 2:04 AM
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CC, the next time a little girl tries pushing a doll against your face..just remember it just might be you sitting just a wee bit too close to the mother..LOL. Yes, today tread with me with a walk in the park and that little guy was cute and if I made my way towards him he would have ran back home like all hell broke loose cause I am after all a stranger to him..I shall start with a smile CC. thanks so much for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on August 19, 2010 at 1:03 AM
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So do we walk softly with you in the park today Shobana, this is nice because it comes alive, it is you. It is sad really one doesn't like to speak to young children even when approached innocently by them if one is male. About a year ago I was in the Doctors waiting room and a little girl kept pushing a doll against my face, her Mother was giggling. I have now revised a skill as a ventriloquist and next time will shout 'get away, you naughty dolly.'
posted by
C_C_T
on August 19, 2010 at 12:25 AM
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shobana
? Our eyes can be blinds. To open them causes a clear day love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 18, 2010 at 9:57 PM
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I liked the omniscient voice! It was very engaging imagery! I adore the message, even if underlying of befriending a kid; it could make all the difference in one's life on both side of the befriending! Well done, indeed! And love you dearly my Shobana! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on August 18, 2010 at 9:37 PM
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Shobana
You make me want to befriend that kid too luv, well done.
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 18, 2010 at 8:29 PM
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taps is right... I wanted to hug him! Great writing! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on August 18, 2010 at 7:33 PM
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So vivid, such imagery. I wanted to reach out to the little boy.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 18, 2010 at 7:00 PM
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Yes FSI, I can understand that - I do that too but with kids..things are different for me. Thanks so much for the visit my friend.
posted by
shobana
on August 18, 2010 at 6:53 PM
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There were many times in which I wished that I had approached someone to befriend them, but I never did. As a result this poem really strikes a chord.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 18, 2010 at 6:51 PM
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Re: Keep an eye on him in the park
Thank you darling, It was in the early morning but I will..cute guy.
posted by
shobana
on August 18, 2010 at 6:44 PM
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Keep an eye on him in the park
bad things sometimes happen after dark
I like your poem.
posted by
Kabu
on August 18, 2010 at 6:41 PM
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the flow and the choice of stlye was very smart.
posted by
NIGHTWRITE
on August 18, 2010 at 6:21 PM
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