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Re: I love your very old poems. ....people forget that children/babies think
Yes Kabu I can remember things from about two years before that it was a lovely time warm and cuddly, do you think that's what we all strive for?
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C_C_T
on August 18, 2010 at 11:06 PM
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Lo Shobana thought that you might take a days rest, I must read your poem this morning.
Thank you.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 18, 2010 at 11:03 PM
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I guess so Taps, the knocks start early in life thank you,
posted by
C_C_T
on August 18, 2010 at 10:58 PM
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Thank you DS just as I say different themes when one is terribly young.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 18, 2010 at 10:55 PM
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Thanks Sam I always felt these poems were a bit embarrassing and were probably written to comfort myself. Machine going good
posted by
C_C_T
on August 18, 2010 at 10:52 PM
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Re: CORNCAKE
Perhaps you were a second baby Bill
posted by
C_C_T
on August 18, 2010 at 10:49 PM
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Re: very old poems
Thank you Bob they were really written like this because I remembered them in my mind and did not write them down, but when I got up to twenty or so I just started scribbling them had them printed in a book well only a tiny one and refused a promotion which might have sold a few and told the firm to destroy the 3oo copies. I did place some of these in the journal once but I think most people who read them have gone except the long stayers.
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C_C_T
on August 18, 2010 at 10:48 PM
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CORNCAKE
? I love that childlike perspective again sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 18, 2010 at 9:50 PM
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The Cherry Blossom was such a cool poem! And in the first one, I thought realization was the theme and it was a marvelous way to close the poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 18, 2010 at 9:15 PM
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that was cool
posted by
NIGHTWRITE
on August 18, 2010 at 9:12 PM
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I loved the
Second Baby. It always happens. The one who was an only child just can't help it for a while.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 18, 2010 at 7:15 PM
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Loved it CC..your old poems are just great - love the cherry blossoms.
posted by
shobana
on August 18, 2010 at 6:42 PM
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I love your very old poems. ....people forget that children/babies think
things through to their own conclusion.
posted by
Kabu
on August 18, 2010 at 6:32 PM
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very old poems
I'm not sure why, but there's something about that last line, "my cherry trees", that really nails it down for me.You make the poem your own, and you've made that important.
posted by
2902
on August 18, 2010 at 4:57 PM
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very old poems
I enjoyed them both, but I'm very taken with the second. It's charming, graceful, musical - right up there with the finest spring poetry I've read! I'm saving it. (So, what's this spring thing? Checked your calendar lately?)
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2902
on August 18, 2010 at 1:18 PM
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