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Re: I love your very old poems. ....people forget that children/babies think
Yes Kabu I can remember things from about two years before that it was a lovely time warm and cuddly, do you think that's what we all strive for?

posted by C_C_T on August 18, 2010 at 11:06 PM | link to this | reply

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Lo Shobana thought that you might take a days rest, I must read your poem this morning.

Thank you.

posted by C_C_T on August 18, 2010 at 11:03 PM | link to this | reply

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I guess so Taps, the knocks start early in life thank you,   

posted by C_C_T on August 18, 2010 at 10:58 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you DS just as I say  different themes when one is terribly young.

posted by C_C_T on August 18, 2010 at 10:55 PM | link to this | reply

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Thanks Sam I always felt these poems were a bit embarrassing and were probably written to comfort myself. Machine going good 

posted by C_C_T on August 18, 2010 at 10:52 PM | link to this | reply

Re: CORNCAKE
Perhaps you were a second baby Bill

posted by C_C_T on August 18, 2010 at 10:49 PM | link to this | reply

Re: very old poems
Thank you Bob they were really written like this because I remembered them in my mind and did not write them down, but when I got up to twenty or so I  just started scribbling them had them printed in a book well only a tiny one and refused a promotion which might have sold a few and told the firm to destroy the 3oo copies. I did place some of these in the journal once but I think most people who read them have gone except the long stayers. 

posted by C_C_T on August 18, 2010 at 10:48 PM | link to this | reply

CORNCAKE

? I love that childlike perspective again sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on August 18, 2010 at 9:50 PM | link to this | reply

The Cherry Blossom was such a cool poem! And in the first one, I thought realization was the theme and it was a marvelous way to close the poem! sam

posted by sam444 on August 18, 2010 at 9:15 PM | link to this | reply

that was cool  

posted by NIGHTWRITE on August 18, 2010 at 9:12 PM | link to this | reply

I loved the Second Baby.  It always happens.  The one who was an only child just can't help it for a while.

posted by TAPS. on August 18, 2010 at 7:15 PM | link to this | reply

Loved it CC..your old poems are just great - love the cherry blossoms.

posted by shobana on August 18, 2010 at 6:42 PM | link to this | reply

I love your very old poems. ....people forget that children/babies think
things through to their own conclusion.

posted by Kabu on August 18, 2010 at 6:32 PM | link to this | reply

very old poems

I'm not sure why, but there's something about that last line, "my cherry trees", that really nails it down for me.You make the poem your own, and you've made that important.

posted by 2902 on August 18, 2010 at 4:57 PM | link to this | reply

very old poems
I enjoyed them both, but I'm very taken with the second.  It's charming, graceful, musical - right up there with the finest spring poetry I've read!  I'm saving it. (So, what's this spring thing?  Checked your calendar lately?)

posted by 2902 on August 18, 2010 at 1:18 PM | link to this | reply