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Funny how light that last straw always is.
posted by
Pat_B
on August 18, 2010 at 4:07 AM
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Re: floater
You DID read it before. I re-posted it some hours later because it was an experiment I'd spent a lot of work on but it was getting buried very quickly, and I was hoping to get more feedback on it. Might happen again! Oh, and I like your poem "Time" and wrote a long note at the end of it. I was 25 fifty years ago, so the topic intrigued me, though my data is a little foggy.
posted by
2902
on August 18, 2010 at 2:19 AM
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Hey Bob I thought that I had read this but I suppose it's what one would call a floater.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 17, 2010 at 10:38 PM
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straw
Right, that's for the maker alone to decide! You are the tour director, and you gave me one helluva ride! Thank you!
posted by
2902
on August 17, 2010 at 10:00 PM
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Thanks for the advise on my latest poem Bob :-) You are probably right, I tend to get to "wordy" when I write loll but you see it just comes out... it writes itself pretty much and is not as if I am trying to give who reads it more information... is what I am feeling... or rather what I felt... what is. Hard to explain, but if I were to shorten it , it would be as if someone would cut off all the roses of a rose bush except for one, following the logic that the one is just so perfect and beautiful there is no need for the rest. So many perfect roses might not be "needed" but never the less they "are"/// Oh... there I go again with my verbosity loll... sorry... and thanks again.
posted by
Sinome
on August 17, 2010 at 9:54 PM
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FAbulous poem Bob :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on August 17, 2010 at 9:21 PM
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