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I love poems with a story and a message, and this poem is amazing
I had a nightmare two nights ago, and I opened my eyes in morning very scared and confused and it lasted all day. It actually forced me to do some research on dreams, which was great :) I think everyone can relate to this poem
posted by
Tzippy
on August 17, 2010 at 9:06 PM
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Sinome
I woke up like that this morning, too early, after nightmares about my first wife asking me the names of my children's Godparents which of course I can't remember. Don't know why she was in my dreams this morning. Great reminder your poetry luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 17, 2010 at 7:14 PM
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I have looked very forward to many a next day...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 17, 2010 at 6:54 PM
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i USED TO HAVE SUCH NIGHTMARES IN THE BAD LAND DAYS
NOW MY DREAMS ARE SWEET.SO WELL DONE DARLING....YOU HAVE TOUCHED RAW EMOTION.
posted by
Kabu
on August 17, 2010 at 3:08 PM
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I can relate to this
in my waking moments but thankfully less so these days
posted by
malcolm
on August 17, 2010 at 10:31 AM
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That is horribly vivid
I think I will stay up late tonight
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on August 17, 2010 at 8:05 AM
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Well it's a good poem Simone, but it doesn't make me feel that I want to go through that feeling.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 17, 2010 at 7:58 AM
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Sinome
T I guess that mornings can feel timeless love . BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 17, 2010 at 4:57 AM
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Such a nice flow...and so true are your words! Love the symbolism
posted by
cosy
on August 16, 2010 at 9:31 PM
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Bad dreams turn into sweet dreams after reading this beauty Sinome. Lovely.thanks for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on August 16, 2010 at 8:35 PM
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Absolutely beautiful! You just put me at ease...
posted by
aceblade
on August 16, 2010 at 8:26 PM
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