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T When I was young we climbed the Delaware Water Gap. The guy led us off the trail. In deer hunting season. The hunters crossed us. They held rifles. “How’re you doing?” We wanted to see if we could catch up with the girl that I would like in the future in Philadelphia and a male student. They traveled separately. We didn’t but stood by Sun Lake on the top. Also the view from Bear Mountain in New York’s beautiful. There you follow the park walk! Nice to see, love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 17, 2010 at 4:32 AM
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I think a better view always gives one a better perspective as this poem so reflects! Very engaging imagery, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 16, 2010 at 6:40 PM
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Really one of the best poems I have read with deep meanings Mariss. Sometimes the entrance out of the cave is much needed. Thanks so much for your very wise comment in my blog.
posted by
shobana
on August 16, 2010 at 6:02 PM
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Really nice work...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 16, 2010 at 2:01 PM
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we have highs and lows and yes plateaus
but always someone special like you reaches gradually to a higher place where comfort and gentle happiness awaits.I just know it.
posted by
Kabu
on August 16, 2010 at 1:50 PM
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