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I deeply appreciate your comments, I feel that the rhyme enhances the flow of poem and I know many will agree.
posted by
csherloc
on August 15, 2010 at 8:04 PM
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What a great ending! I was aghast at first and then so very delighted at the end! BRAVO!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 15, 2010 at 7:16 PM
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I like the way you rhyme.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 15, 2010 at 1:51 PM
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cshweloc
I agree with Corncrake amusing and of course you have a golden Belt. Funny! Fememefeme
posted by
fememefeme
on August 15, 2010 at 9:33 AM
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Yes dear give them a scare, or a nice surprise. Quite amusing
posted by
C_C_T
on August 15, 2010 at 7:07 AM
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