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Hi Shama, how are you? Hope all is fine with you and not seen your poem as yet..23 days since you have written??? No wonder I missed you. Thank you for the visit and comment.
posted by
shobana
on August 15, 2010 at 7:10 PM
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How I miss the fabulous Asian Peninsular, I can smell the spices and just
see those lovely welcoming smiles everywhere. ...
posted by
Kabu
on August 15, 2010 at 5:16 PM
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Nice illustration, shobana!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 15, 2010 at 2:34 PM
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I want to be in lovely Malaysia, too! I love a pleasant, sunny Sunday morning! I did mangage to get one in my desert today! I thought the imagery set was awesome, I like it when special effects are used to bring forth the imagery! It felt very universal, too! Only, for me it was about the pesky little problems I am having with my computer and debit card! So, I have chosen to eat of the good fruits of life for it will pass and all will be back to normal! Great strength in this poem for it gets the reader thinking and for me that is always a bonus! I will let you have the upper hand on the I love you a trillion for you did it first! But I offer my love as the universe, with no end! GOTCHA!!! Love you dearly my Shobana! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on August 15, 2010 at 2:10 PM
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I try to be humble and kind
posted by
Lanetay
on August 15, 2010 at 9:06 AM
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shobana
Wonderful!!!
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on August 15, 2010 at 8:45 AM
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shobana
£R Aah the moments know love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 15, 2010 at 7:07 AM
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Hi, life has a handful of varied moments,some blissful,some harsh,a few mixed ones & you have captured them soulfully in these lovely lines!
posted by
shamasehar
on August 15, 2010 at 4:51 AM
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Hello Shobana it seems one must tread carefully today. This was quite an interesting poem, I liked the little phrases, that revealed answers subtly. I think you may not have plucked it from the blue. Good though
posted by
C_C_T
on August 15, 2010 at 12:56 AM
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Shobana, I'll bet those Malaysian sunrises are Gorgeous and your poem is truly inspirational.
posted by
yellowrose55
on August 14, 2010 at 11:32 PM
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great work as usual, very fun to read
have a great sun shine sunday
posted by
Tzippy
on August 14, 2010 at 10:17 PM
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Shobana
Indeed it doesn't hurt us to be humble and kind luv and have a blessed Sunday
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 14, 2010 at 9:57 PM
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FSI, you have such a long way to go (for me to hear you say 25 like that??). Now don't let me give you a
nagging like I did my daughters last night. There will be beautiful memories and humbling experiences and so far in my books you are Number One as the most humble and wise person in this whole wide world..and it is also because of those experiences you have encountered and learned from at such a young age.
Your parents must be so proud of you.
posted by
shobana
on August 14, 2010 at 8:09 PM
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Re: Shabana
You are most welcome LB..have a great evening.
posted by
shobana
on August 14, 2010 at 8:05 PM
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I wish that more people would be humble in this world. All of our life experiences would be a lot easier...In my twenty-five years I am amazed at how many memorable time stood still moments that I have had.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 14, 2010 at 8:04 PM
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Shabana
Beautiful poem..I enjoyed reading it very mukch thank you for sharing/LBJ
posted by
MsJudy
on August 14, 2010 at 8:04 PM
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Great insights, Dear Shobana!
Moments - All better, less bitter when shared in some way or the other; my perspective.
posted by
Katray2
on August 14, 2010 at 7:37 PM
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Do you think we are thrust into the moments ment only for each of us? Be blessed dear lady.
posted by
Justi
on August 14, 2010 at 7:25 PM
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I think you are right Taps..thanks so much for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on August 14, 2010 at 7:12 PM
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I think that along the way of life I have met just about every kind of moment that there is. If I've missed some, that's all right. I think I can do without those I've missed.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 14, 2010 at 7:11 PM
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Yes, moments in time,,,,
posted by
Straightforward
on August 14, 2010 at 6:22 PM
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