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Re: Comment on "YOU"
Thank You! You felt it didn't you? I appreciate your commenting. love and joy, Kay 
posted by
KayJoy
on August 14, 2010 at 12:13 PM
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HOnest and raw... that is what makes good poetry, when it just flows through the pen into the page taking pieces of our soul with it. Excellent job :-)
posted by
Sinome
on August 14, 2010 at 10:07 AM
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Re: Comment on "YOU"
Thank you Katra for words of encouragement. It was painful to write as well. Didn't know I had it in me.
posted by
KayJoy
on August 14, 2010 at 9:01 AM
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Re:Comment on "YOU"
Bill, I love reading your feedback. You make me feel like a writer, and coming from you, that is saying a lot. I did not know I had this kind of poems in me. Thank You, love and joy, Kay
posted by
KayJoy
on August 14, 2010 at 8:58 AM
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Painful but powerful, Kayjoy, Well done!
posted by
Katray2
on August 14, 2010 at 8:42 AM
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KayJoy
m You hold the mood of melancholy consistently. It makes the poem move sadly. That’s what you want love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
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BC-A
on August 14, 2010 at 8:38 AM
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Re: Could be anybody's You - Reply
Yes, it is very deep hurt. It is mostly my son's hurt, and what he has shared with me, without saying it in words. It is on the dark side, but he holds the pain all inside. Thank you for your comment and reading my words. Very much appreciated. love and joy, Kay
posted by
KayJoy
on August 14, 2010 at 5:23 AM
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Could be anybody's You
Yours is an expression of deep hurt,----the saying goes, if you love it let it go, if it comes back it is yours,if it does not, it never was.
posted by
csherloc
on August 14, 2010 at 4:35 AM
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