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Hello my dear Sam, I saw you online and made a beeline..LOL. Thank you sweetie, Oh..I am having a glorious weekend with my girls and we go super shopping later too!! but I am just too hot and bothered about a few things on my mind...
posted by
shobana
on August 14, 2010 at 6:16 PM
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Whispers can be very sensual! I love the imagery and you, too my Shobana, a trillion +2! lol I just had to up ot one!I hope you are having a glorious weekend! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on August 14, 2010 at 6:04 PM
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So pleasant...I do not know French, but it sounds pefect for the whispering wind.
posted by
mariss9
on August 14, 2010 at 7:31 AM
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Beautifully put! Like always, Shobana
posted by
clarerichard
on August 13, 2010 at 4:02 PM
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Shobana
The gentleness of a kiss upon your cheek laughter for youur soul. nice. Femia
posted by
fememefeme
on August 13, 2010 at 11:57 AM
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shobana
6 It was the wind love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 13, 2010 at 10:57 AM
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beautiful, shobana, (as always) and you have me
and you have me brushing up on my French..
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posted by
Rumor
on August 13, 2010 at 10:49 AM
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Gorgeous
this poem is a real delight
posted by
lionreign
on August 13, 2010 at 7:27 AM
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Shobana, well I am lazy so I'm not going to to try to translate your instinctive revelation.
So I will just stay with the whispers of the leaves and try to listen to what you are hearing. Very nice writing, well done.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 13, 2010 at 1:04 AM
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Thank you lustorlove..just a fun one sweetie.
posted by
shobana
on August 12, 2010 at 10:27 PM
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Re: GOOD ONE SHOBS LOVE
Thanks Kabu darling..
posted by
shobana
on August 12, 2010 at 10:26 PM
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very sensitive poem
posted by
Lanetay
on August 12, 2010 at 10:26 PM
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Re: Shobana
Thank you Wiley John - glad you liked it.
posted by
shobana
on August 12, 2010 at 10:25 PM
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That is lovely indeed FSI. Thank you for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on August 12, 2010 at 10:07 PM
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Thank you Sinome, glad you liked it. I always feel the french language has so much passion in it.
posted by
shobana
on August 12, 2010 at 10:07 PM
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GOOD ONE SHOBS LOVE
posted by
Kabu
on August 12, 2010 at 8:58 PM
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Shobana
Formidable chéri.
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 12, 2010 at 8:54 PM
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Very cool indeed, shobana!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 12, 2010 at 8:48 PM
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A wind came my way today in the 101
o temperature, brought some clouds, a lot of thunder, and a little bit of rain. It cooled it down by two degrees and then the sun was back and the heat, plus a big rise in humidity to make it more uncomfortable.
Your poem is beautiful.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 12, 2010 at 8:44 PM
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What is said so quietly is something that makes me feel great tranquility inside.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 12, 2010 at 8:37 PM
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Breath takingly beautiful Shobana... Loved it all... specially the French touch at the end :-) Truly lovely xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on August 12, 2010 at 8:36 PM
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Re: Beautiful and real, Dear Shobana!
Thank you Katray..just imagery my friend.
posted by
shobana
on August 12, 2010 at 8:23 PM
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Beautiful and real, Dear Shobana!
posted by
Katray2
on August 12, 2010 at 8:22 PM
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Oh dear..maybe the drink too jfm..LOL. Spanish?? LOL. Thanks so much for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on August 12, 2010 at 8:17 PM
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Yes, this Spainish poeatry really workks. I speially like Rimbaud (the Drunken Boat--because everyone has to be somplace, and right now I can really relate to it--oh, ok I got it: Ce La Mar melle' avec le soleia...
and Rimbaud, there's a real guy who can die of syphilus with his money belt on! Ok, so Im going to die laughing to myself about my lack of sense of humor, but I really do like all these voices.
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jfm32
on August 12, 2010 at 8:13 PM
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posted by
RomaKay
on August 12, 2010 at 7:47 PM
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Ah..dsm, je veux ecriver en francais aussi..quelque temps..lol.il est tout le bon pour moi. Merci.
posted by
shobana
on August 12, 2010 at 7:44 PM
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shobana, Quelle surprise! La poesie francaise! Je veux ecriver en francais aussi...j'ai une poeme, "la Petite Amis Noire". j'on vais chercher!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on August 12, 2010 at 7:40 PM
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