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Re: CORNCAKE
Where is it Bill it is an extra blanket tonight you have always got Mrs Sun.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 13, 2010 at 12:15 PM
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Re: C.C. you've captured the sadder side of life in a very poignant poem...
No Rumour although I love cherries and grew my own this year the birds didn't take them for a wonder. Thank you for calling
posted by
C_C_T
on August 13, 2010 at 12:14 PM
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Re: how tragic
Thank you for reading lionreign it must be the moon.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 13, 2010 at 12:12 PM
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C.C. you've captured the sadder side of life in a very poignant poem...
Like someone has said, "life isn't always a bowl of cherries", or even a box of chocolates.....
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posted by
Rumor
on August 13, 2010 at 10:37 AM
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CORNCAKE
6 Sunshine works sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 13, 2010 at 10:16 AM
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how tragic
and how inspiring... the word threadbare is resonating now - thank you
posted by
lionreign
on August 13, 2010 at 7:25 AM
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Re: Soaringly poignant and image laden, C.C.
Thank you Katray, a poetical reply
posted by
C_C_T
on August 13, 2010 at 12:38 AM
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Re: Question
Hi aceblade sometimes I take a poem and flesh it out, think do I like it myself, or do I just think it is alright, Of course one must never think anything is remotely perfect or then I believe one not aspire to write better. Try to think of things in a different way the coconut trees, try to bring them alive feel the ripple in the leaves kick over the husks which are ground up and sold in little packets as compost and the broken leaves after a gale flapping listlessly. then you can think what it looks like to those who have never seen such a tree.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 13, 2010 at 12:35 AM
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It is the complex organisation of one's experiences that tend to push into first gear Sam one roars up the road and cannot get into second.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 13, 2010 at 12:19 AM
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Thank you Shobana, I just couldn't cut the mustard yesterday, I shall have to make my comments shorter, so I went through a pile of poems, I honestly can't remember at times if I have posted them before not the little lovey dovey ones I just steal emanations if you know what I mean.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 13, 2010 at 12:15 AM
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Re: Threads...sad little poem but well written of course.
Well what did expect Kabu with you and Wiley being away.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 13, 2010 at 12:10 AM
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FS the sad thing is that those who never appear to worry can crack and have no experience of wear and tear.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 13, 2010 at 12:09 AM
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Re: Very nice. Kind of sad but heartfelt.
Thank you Spitfire it is life sometimes
posted by
C_C_T
on August 13, 2010 at 12:06 AM
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Well lauren since taking a magic pill every day I seem to always hover in a state of indifference. You see dear you are always on the wrong page, one doesn't do humor I leave that to my ghastly relatives. Well it's nice to have your Dad with you, perhaps he feels lonely, make a bit of a fuss of him, he might disapprove, but he will love it.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 13, 2010 at 12:04 AM
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well this is a change CC, where was the humour you are so good at, Do I need to say chirp up my friend. My day was the same yesterday and we poets are destined to write on our emotions, that is what makes us who we are, writers of truth....
posted by
spiderfly
on August 12, 2010 at 11:32 PM
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Very nice. Kind of sad but heartfelt.
posted by
SpitFire70
on August 12, 2010 at 10:50 PM
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Our lives can very much show the wear and tear of our experiences. I admire those who are able to go forward seemingly so well.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 12, 2010 at 8:29 PM
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Threads...sad little poem but well written of course.
posted by
Kabu
on August 12, 2010 at 8:22 PM
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It does have a sad ending CC but then all life is like that. One just cannot have it all, right? I hope you are feeling ok.
posted by
shobana
on August 12, 2010 at 7:36 PM
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It can end this sadly enough! But as long as there is a thread in existence I believe hope has a chance! Very exquisite imagery, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 12, 2010 at 3:31 PM
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Question
I really like your poetry. Meaningful, yet your metaphors are easy to understand; making your poetry easy to read...in my opinion. Question is...What can I do to make my poems more metaphorically intense??
posted by
aceblade
on August 12, 2010 at 1:02 PM
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Soaringly poignant and image laden, C.C.
Fruitful writing indeed!
posted by
Katray2
on August 12, 2010 at 11:17 AM
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