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Fantastic! almost like song lyrics
posted by
clarerichard
on August 13, 2010 at 4:42 AM
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A most excellent close! I adored the imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 12, 2010 at 5:56 PM
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Reads like that place between sleep and full awakening
Good weaving and visual effects!
posted by
Katray2
on August 12, 2010 at 5:40 AM
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Now lauren what ever is up with you today, you seem rather down in the dumps. I suppose one can try to spin out of it. I am not going to criticize your poem because I think you were throwing clay on a wheel and not trying to make a bowl. If you bought the donkey it is partly my fault, I read your blog yesterday and you seemed so happy, I don't know why I missed replying and I do sense that some folk do not want me to. So there you are I don't know what to say only that it will pass and I hope you have good news. The trouble is I can't switch back and read your blog again in order to read something cheerful. Be lucky.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 12, 2010 at 5:22 AM
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Dreaming can take you to so many places or scenes in a few minutes.
posted by
csherloc
on August 12, 2010 at 4:46 AM
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