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I enjoyed "the ride" through the verses in your "mind" and various facets! Very nice
posted by
cosy
on August 14, 2010 at 8:11 PM
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That special someone can be great for a person's mind.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 12, 2010 at 8:36 PM
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I love how the mind can multi-task so to speak! This was wonderful imagery, too! Love you my Shobana! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on August 12, 2010 at 6:15 PM
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Cool indeed!
posted by
ash_pradhan
on August 12, 2010 at 4:54 PM
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shobana, thats the wonderful thing about our minds...one area can be
enjoying an awesome ride while another can be enjoying an awesome rest..
....
(also known as multitasking...
..)
posted by
Rumor
on August 12, 2010 at 11:23 AM
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yes our mind can do wonders
posted by
Lanetay
on August 12, 2010 at 9:05 AM
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Peace...
in your mind.
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on August 12, 2010 at 9:04 AM
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Love it!
This is gorgeous
posted by
lionreign
on August 12, 2010 at 7:00 AM
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Enchanting stream of emotion, Dear Shobana!
posted by
Katray2
on August 12, 2010 at 6:19 AM
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Re: Awesome, shobana! The mind is amazing
That's great Sunnybeach. am heading home now but am happy to see your comment here in my blog. Take care.
posted by
shobana
on August 12, 2010 at 1:57 AM
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Awesome, shobana! The mind is amazing
I was just thinking about you (and a few others I haven't commented to lately) when I saw your comment
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 12, 2010 at 1:48 AM
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Re:
CC, when I constructed this poem, it just moved with the pace I was writing..I ended the poem on a gentle note as I felt the poem was a little rough...I don't really know how to explain it otherwise but yes you are right..we all need need someone kind and loving in our minds but the feelings might fade away but the thought always stays. Thank you for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on August 12, 2010 at 1:08 AM
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Well Shobana we all need someone kind and loving in our minds and one day when one feels it is no longer needed it will fade away.
I take it that this was a love poem, with all the doubts surrounding it. Very cleverly construed,
posted by
C_C_T
on August 12, 2010 at 12:46 AM
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Re: An awesome ride
Thank you LB for the lovely comment.
posted by
shobana
on August 11, 2010 at 11:59 PM
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An awesome ride
Shobana, very beautiful..I agree with dsm tchr..it is great/LBJ
posted by
MsJudy
on August 11, 2010 at 11:56 PM
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shobana, Your very best! I would put this one to music!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on August 11, 2010 at 10:22 PM
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shobana
m Quite a lot of motion here. Excellent read love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 11, 2010 at 9:41 PM
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I love the first few lines the most
and I have to tell you, I walked on coals, hot sizzling coals, and it was the most liberating experience of my life... you should try it, but not at home alone :) you must have proper guidance.....etc ....
posted by
Tzippy
on August 11, 2010 at 8:20 PM
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Great poem Shobana :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on August 11, 2010 at 8:19 PM
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Re: Re: No one wants to get off and miss the ride...how cool is that!
VERY kinda cool...yesss!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 11, 2010 at 7:52 PM
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Re: No one wants to get off and miss the ride...how cool is that!
Thank you and kinda cool - yes??
posted by
shobana
on August 11, 2010 at 7:48 PM
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No one wants to get off and miss the ride...how cool is that!
Mighteeee fine, Lady!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 11, 2010 at 7:44 PM
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nicely thought out darling...to rise above one's physical.
posted by
Kabu
on August 11, 2010 at 7:12 PM
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